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12/4/2002 c1 erzulie

This is sooooo good. Truly. You're extremely talented! See ya!

11/10/2002 c1 Fleetwood
This is excellent. You've captured the scene perfectly, as well as the protagonist's personality and thoughts. The language is excellent; some of the lines are wonderfully memorable; I especially like:

"Lest this silence be the death of you."

And the last line is fantastic - gorgeously worded, and a solid (and perfectly in-character) ending to the entire piece.

"If only to see those uncommon things - clods of earth falling onto glossy mahogany - and to hear that infamous line which they use in the movies, then yes."

Great title, too.

10/11/2002 c1 1soyamiso

I can't stand reviewing your works because my words don't seem adequate enough to convey your talent. Well, I'll try.

This was great! (see? blah!)
10/7/2002 c1 1Raen

That's honest work, that is, and really quite scary as you show what people can actually be thinking at funerals, unwilling even then to show feeling and emotions

I like the styley way you've written it, like strict, unhuman rules,

very intersting ^_^
10/7/2002 c1 5Frozenflower
Wow, this is very good. Very evocative, nice choice of POV. Your character is very real and as always, your work is funny, if in a darker sort of way this time. Nice ending, I really enjoyed this, ^_^

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