
6/22/2003 c3
3R.F. Elffib
::jumps up and down, clapping madly:: I like, I like! I -love- vampire stories! Yours is really well written, too! More, more, more!

::jumps up and down, clapping madly:: I like, I like! I -love- vampire stories! Yours is really well written, too! More, more, more!
3/25/2003 c3
1KiwiiAngel
This is a GR8 story! Keep up the great work! Keep writing! Next chapter asap! Please? I feel so bad for poor benny...

This is a GR8 story! Keep up the great work! Keep writing! Next chapter asap! Please? I feel so bad for poor benny...
2/12/2003 c3
18IamPOISON
Awwwwww man thats cruel just leaving it like that when it gets all exciting. Youve gotta update soon.

Awwwwww man thats cruel just leaving it like that when it gets all exciting. Youve gotta update soon.
11/25/2002 c3 Flying heart
Hmm...Nice story...but I'll think it would be better if he WAS a vampire hunter and then he'll be shocked? to find out he was killing his own kind. I love this story, and I would LOVE it if you would e-mail me at () when it's updated. Thanks~!
~Flying heart~
Hmm...Nice story...but I'll think it would be better if he WAS a vampire hunter and then he'll be shocked? to find out he was killing his own kind. I love this story, and I would LOVE it if you would e-mail me at () when it's updated. Thanks~!
~Flying heart~
11/6/2002 c3 vampyregoddess36
much better than the second chapter keep going i hope you write more!
much better than the second chapter keep going i hope you write more!
11/4/2002 c3
2Rara Wolf
poor benny, seems everyone wants to kill him! can't wait for the next chapter!

poor benny, seems everyone wants to kill him! can't wait for the next chapter!
10/22/2002 c2 vampyregoddess36
hmm the first chapter was way better this chapter they seemed why to much like two teen age teenie bobbers im surprised they didn't start say gee golly...
hmm the first chapter was way better this chapter they seemed why to much like two teen age teenie bobbers im surprised they didn't start say gee golly...
10/19/2002 c2 Guest
really good!
really good!
10/19/2002 c1
10Wan
hmm...interesting plot! though the idea of a vampire being conceived thru sex is sorta strange... dunno, but i've always had this mental image of vampires being made thru the giving of their blood... but your concept sure does open up new windows in my mind... nice starting! do continue... :)

hmm...interesting plot! though the idea of a vampire being conceived thru sex is sorta strange... dunno, but i've always had this mental image of vampires being made thru the giving of their blood... but your concept sure does open up new windows in my mind... nice starting! do continue... :)
10/9/2002 c1
1Saphirerose
This is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

This is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
10/7/2002 c1 Guest
this is a really good chapter. i can't wait for the next chapter!
this is a really good chapter. i can't wait for the next chapter!