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12/29/2002 c1 Star7
pained beyond all belief. breaking something you thought unbreakable, hurting someone you never meant to hurt. morals are held by many and they are the highest code of honor. in here, i feel the dark remorse at having killed that. slowly the burning need fades and a shadowed guilt remains. very dark but with so much humanity. very well done. since you didn't rhyme continously, there a good steady rhythm throughout most of it. and i really enjoyed the substance. excellent. bravo. (great choice on flogging molly :)
10/7/2002 c1 lazyalice
Wow. That was very, very good. I enjoyed all that insight you put into your writing, and I hope to see more stuff from you in the future!
10/7/2002 c1 5Erin2
rather depressing, but good.

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