for The Experiment10/5/2013 c67 LazySundayGirl
oh my goodness, MORE MAI LI? IM GONNA GO CHECK THAT STORY OUT RIGHT NOW!
anyway, you have really progressed as a writer throughout the story, and j kept on enjoying it more and more. even though I didnt enjoy the struggles, I enjoyed the fluffy parts a lot, they were awesome.
sorry for probably driving your email crazy with all of these reviews, sorry for the sometimes violent and weird reciews, and sorry for overusing the words oh my goodness, awesome, and seriously.
but tthank you for posting this story, cause it made my days better, even when my head was killing me from my sinus infection. good stories tend to do that :)
oh my goodness, MORE MAI LI? IM GONNA GO CHECK THAT STORY OUT RIGHT NOW!
anyway, you have really progressed as a writer throughout the story, and j kept on enjoying it more and more. even though I didnt enjoy the struggles, I enjoyed the fluffy parts a lot, they were awesome.
sorry for probably driving your email crazy with all of these reviews, sorry for the sometimes violent and weird reciews, and sorry for overusing the words oh my goodness, awesome, and seriously.
but tthank you for posting this story, cause it made my days better, even when my head was killing me from my sinus infection. good stories tend to do that :)
10/5/2013 c66 LazySundayGirl
ive been wanting to lock up two of my friends too, cause they couldnt stand each other (and the fact that they are exes doesnt help-BTW, I am the youngest of my grade so they are all 14 and 15...) buuut then the guy said sorry so no need anymore! thank goodness, i had no idea where to lock them up.
ive been wanting to lock up two of my friends too, cause they couldnt stand each other (and the fact that they are exes doesnt help-BTW, I am the youngest of my grade so they are all 14 and 15...) buuut then the guy said sorry so no need anymore! thank goodness, i had no idea where to lock them up.
10/5/2013 c65 LazySundayGirl
i had a huge huge HUGE grin on my face the whole time. this was seriously cute, the recap of everything. totally awesome.
i had a huge huge HUGE grin on my face the whole time. this was seriously cute, the recap of everything. totally awesome.
10/5/2013 c63 LazySundayGirl
serves her right. and yes, im aware that that is the third time i say it, but Penny really deserves it. I KNEW SHE DRUGGED CHRIS! *does a victory dance*
serves her right. and yes, im aware that that is the third time i say it, but Penny really deserves it. I KNEW SHE DRUGGED CHRIS! *does a victory dance*
10/5/2013 c62 LazySundayGirl
well, things take a spin for the unusual. her BOYFRIEND was SAD that she WAS NOT PREGNANT? how does that even work? didint he think of getting up in the night cause the baaby's crying, or the costs or anything?
well, things take a spin for the unusual. her BOYFRIEND was SAD that she WAS NOT PREGNANT? how does that even work? didint he think of getting up in the night cause the baaby's crying, or the costs or anything?
10/5/2013 c60 LazySundayGirl
well shit. she messed up big time, even though Marlows a jackass in this chapter...
well shit. she messed up big time, even though Marlows a jackass in this chapter...
10/5/2013 c59 LazySundayGirl
alright, you get a little bit of love for not making her pregnant. and not being the reason i go to jail the rest of my life. Orange does not suit my skin tone...
alright, you get a little bit of love for not making her pregnant. and not being the reason i go to jail the rest of my life. Orange does not suit my skin tone...
10/5/2013 c58 LazySundayGirl
Kate's grandma is awesome. i would love to have a grandma like that. one of them passed away last April, she was pretty cool though, and the other is still alive. shes one of those you-need-to-eat-more-you-are-too-thin grandmas... shes awesome :)
Kate's grandma is awesome. i would love to have a grandma like that. one of them passed away last April, she was pretty cool though, and the other is still alive. shes one of those you-need-to-eat-more-you-are-too-thin grandmas... shes awesome :)
10/5/2013 c57 LazySundayGirl
if shes pregnant, youre gonna have a problem cause i will hunt down your ass and make you pay for making Kate and Chris go through all this shit.
if shes pregnant, youre gonna have a problem cause i will hunt down your ass and make you pay for making Kate and Chris go through all this shit.
10/5/2013 c54 LazySundayGirl
alright, i get that it was wrong, but he was drugged/drunk... no way denying that, but you cant deny that he kissed Penny... ugh god, youre making me have an internal war with myself!
and the last swear word made me laugh :)
alright, i get that it was wrong, but he was drugged/drunk... no way denying that, but you cant deny that he kissed Penny... ugh god, youre making me have an internal war with myself!
and the last swear word made me laugh :)
10/5/2013 c53 LazySundayGirl
ooh my goodness.. she did not just break up with him cause soon-to-be-anonymously-shipped-to-Siberia-Penny drugged/spiked his drink.. you are sooo not getting any loving from me right now..
ooh my goodness.. she did not just break up with him cause soon-to-be-anonymously-shipped-to-Siberia-Penny drugged/spiked his drink.. you are sooo not getting any loving from me right now..
10/5/2013 c52 LazySundayGirl
she only just realises that he didnt remeber? *frowns* oh well, sometimes you gotta put in things so that the slow-to-catch-up-readers get it... usually im one of those...
she only just realises that he didnt remeber? *frowns* oh well, sometimes you gotta put in things so that the slow-to-catch-up-readers get it... usually im one of those...
10/5/2013 c51 LazySundayGirl
well, this definitely isnt the end, when you leave us with a hlaf-cliffie... kinda obvious, dontcha think ? ;p
anywaay, still loving the writing. and I went back and reread all of my reviews, and they are two pages long... its probably gonna be three by the end... whoops
well, this definitely isnt the end, when you leave us with a hlaf-cliffie... kinda obvious, dontcha think ? ;p
anywaay, still loving the writing. and I went back and reread all of my reviews, and they are two pages long... its probably gonna be three by the end... whoops
10/5/2013 c49 LazySundayGirl
the things you do when youre drunk... well obviously, since Im only 13 (yes, I cuss like a sailor-whoops.) i dont know, but ive heard the dtories. read them, too, and it aint pretty... and niether is this one. now, dont you worry about ruining my 'young little mind', i look older and act older and think older than 13. maybe its the factthat im already 5'11", or 172 centimeters... stupid Dutchie genes..
the things you do when youre drunk... well obviously, since Im only 13 (yes, I cuss like a sailor-whoops.) i dont know, but ive heard the dtories. read them, too, and it aint pretty... and niether is this one. now, dont you worry about ruining my 'young little mind', i look older and act older and think older than 13. maybe its the factthat im already 5'11", or 172 centimeters... stupid Dutchie genes..
10/5/2013 c48 LazySundayGirl
i really dont love you at all at this point. not one single bit. i told you she shouldve kicked her and get her sent off the team AND send her to Siberia, but NOOOOO, you wanted a'plot line', that is considerately less important than my daily dose of fluff, and right now, I WANT FLUFF AND NOT SOME BACKSTABBING TWAT!
but youre still awesome :)
BTW, i understand it was neccessary for a plot, dont get me wrong. i tend to maybe, ah-overeact when it comes to couples that have lots and LOTS of bumps in a story...
i really dont love you at all at this point. not one single bit. i told you she shouldve kicked her and get her sent off the team AND send her to Siberia, but NOOOOO, you wanted a'plot line', that is considerately less important than my daily dose of fluff, and right now, I WANT FLUFF AND NOT SOME BACKSTABBING TWAT!
but youre still awesome :)
BTW, i understand it was neccessary for a plot, dont get me wrong. i tend to maybe, ah-overeact when it comes to couples that have lots and LOTS of bumps in a story...