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7/2/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Wow! This was awesome work.

~Heart of the Sword
12/19/2002 c1 18ni-ru
O_O Very good stuff...I love it when spoken aloud. It's one of these poems you can't just read into yourself in my view. It truely is fantastic :)
11/6/2002 c1 70cmetalangel249
OMG I love this poem! It invokes such a vivid picture in my mind...Thats really good! Its like I'm right there looking at each thing...the sea,the sun, the moon, the day, etc etc. Write more, you have talent!
10/23/2002 c1 72StormyWings
Amazing!

I love it! Your SO good at writing poems!

I wish I could be half as good as you are! lol

Thanks for the reviews! :)
10/20/2002 c1 98hurtmushroom
wow! this is an awesome poem! you really can be proud of it!

btw thanks for the nice revies! they're really appreciated!
10/11/2002 c1 60dollface and her cancer
I love this poem, Elentari! ^^ I particularly like the stanza - "Between the Night and The Day / Between the Dusk and the Dawn / Between the Moon and the Sun / Between the Tide and the Sea." That really got to me. I love your work, keep writing, and come back to visit my stuff soon, too! =)

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