12/19/2002 c1 18ni-ru
O_O Very good stuff...I love it when spoken aloud. It's one of these poems you can't just read into yourself in my view. It truely is fantastic :)
O_O Very good stuff...I love it when spoken aloud. It's one of these poems you can't just read into yourself in my view. It truely is fantastic :)
11/6/2002 c1 70cmetalangel249
OMG I love this poem! It invokes such a vivid picture in my mind...Thats really good! Its like I'm right there looking at each thing...the sea,the sun, the moon, the day, etc etc. Write more, you have talent!
OMG I love this poem! It invokes such a vivid picture in my mind...Thats really good! Its like I'm right there looking at each thing...the sea,the sun, the moon, the day, etc etc. Write more, you have talent!
10/23/2002 c1 72StormyWings
Amazing!
I love it! Your SO good at writing poems!
I wish I could be half as good as you are! lol
Thanks for the reviews! :)
Amazing!
I love it! Your SO good at writing poems!
I wish I could be half as good as you are! lol
Thanks for the reviews! :)
10/20/2002 c1 98hurtmushroom
wow! this is an awesome poem! you really can be proud of it!
btw thanks for the nice revies! they're really appreciated!
wow! this is an awesome poem! you really can be proud of it!
btw thanks for the nice revies! they're really appreciated!
10/11/2002 c1 60dollface and her cancer
I love this poem, Elentari! ^^ I particularly like the stanza - "Between the Night and The Day / Between the Dusk and the Dawn / Between the Moon and the Sun / Between the Tide and the Sea." That really got to me. I love your work, keep writing, and come back to visit my stuff soon, too! =)
I love this poem, Elentari! ^^ I particularly like the stanza - "Between the Night and The Day / Between the Dusk and the Dawn / Between the Moon and the Sun / Between the Tide and the Sea." That really got to me. I love your work, keep writing, and come back to visit my stuff soon, too! =)