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3/30/2004 c1 20My Psychosis
Spooky. I like it. Sounds like something I'd write. Good Job, keep up the good work, and all that other stuff!
3/16/2004 c1 59wilderness
omg
like everyone else said...way disturbing...but SO COOL! a real rush of adrenaline!
that was AMAZING! you are such an amazing writer!
you HAVE to post more! totally!
im going to read more by you now!
that was, again FANTASITC! and scary though! i bet im going to get nightmares now!
lani
3/1/2004 c1 Mia
That was creepy, very good but creepy. (sorry, I'm a little disturbed) -Mia
2/29/2004 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Willum-
Excellent. Just Excellent. AMazing! Disturbing, especially towards the end.
Great job!
Whispers In Silence
2/27/2004 c1 Kim
excellent
2/20/2004 c1 1skatinpanzer00
HOLY HELL THATS DISTURBING! good though, every story i read makes my horror story look more like a drama than a horror i cant write wht i think very good hehe
1/29/2004 c1 1princesss17
you have a mind for the truly horrific. i admire you.
when r you going to write the next chapter?
1/4/2004 c1 Chai Tea
Wow, I was impressed. The way you wrote it was done really well, in case you couldn't tell from all the reviews you already got. I hope you add more to this soon, I'll be waiting for the next chapter so you better post it soon.
11/27/2003 c1 1Cleopatra3
wow. i really really like it lol wow hehe are you going to ... put more on to it, i would really be pleased if you did
11/10/2003 c1 19Connor Triannes
I read this story outloud to some of my classmates at school and I think it disturbed them... GOOD JOB! Hehhe ^_^
9/8/2003 c1 2LUNA thelost FLOWER
gr8 story. continue, i'm very interested. ^_~
8/24/2003 c1 7Krispykrunchie
dude... that was spooky... im gonna have dreams about that now...::shiver:: the ending was freaky... and that guy is nuts! NUTS I SAY! what a freak... but i liked it anyway...=P
8/22/2003 c1 Andala
hey this is really good! youre good at this sort of thing =) the ending was the greatest, i didnt expect that.
7/15/2003 c1 125Invisible Kid
Well I read this one becuase it seemed short and unattatched to any other.

I liked it, it wasn't very scary but reminded me of Buffalo Bill of The Hannible Lector Series.

I'll read more, but this one was good. I can see it as a short movie. Yeah, that would be cool. Good suspense. Keep itup.
7/12/2003 c1 LittleHobbitGirl
GROSS! YOU HAVE A SICK SICK MIND! Great story. Scary...
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