for Red as Blood12/25/2002 c5 
1The Grim Amentia
Merry Christmas, yo! From Cowtown, NY, heeeeeeeeerrres Cait!
*stumbles out with a carton of egg-nog* Heeys...yews coulda let meee finish it firs'...
Sorry, couldn't resist. That SNL skit is just too good. :P
Now, I'm going to be extra-tough on you this time. Murdok's a tough character to play, I think...so you better have done your homework. :P
Just kidding, of course. Not about the tough part, but...aww nevermind. Here goes...
-Nonchalant in the face of danger. I'm going to guess that he dies in three...two...one...
-Whoa! Holy monkeys, I was right! I was just kidding when I said that he was gonna die! *eyes bug out*
-Ah, the descriptions are still good. *hands over candy-cane* The dialog isn't half-bad either. Kudos, to ya'.
-Poor Dark Blade...Not quite a vote of confidence there...
-Yet another cool lookin' spell. I'm thinking of how much fun it would be to animate that...*drools on self*
-Ah, a good bit of character thought for Loki. That sort of thing adds so much more to a story. The contrasting thoughts show his reluctance quite well.
-I'm not that harsh, am I? :P Christmas seasons's effects, I guess...*chuckles*...Oh no...
-Apparently, Neia was not Murdok's only vampiric friend...*keeps reading*
-I know this is a nit-pick, but Murdok (at least in my story) has no 'c' in it. :P
-LOL, that sounds just like him. Raggedy old thing, he is. :P
-Ha! Log in another insert for me! *grins*
-Murdok's memory isn't *that* bad, but I suppose this is a bit in the future, so I'll let it slip. Good touch, though. I'm just being a bastard right now.
-'Nother cool reference...as well as a perfect response. Damn you.
-Ha, the back and forth between Murdok and Loki is great stuff!
-Oh, I oughta mention. When I drew LInn, I drew her in wolfish-form. Hope ya' don't mind. :P
-Yup, he doesn't seem very happy, does he?
-Curse you to the pits Fog! That was too freaking funny! A perfect Murdok-esque response...Perhaps he wouldn't use the word 'shit', but I guess when faced with three unwelcome visitors like these... Eh, I'm nit-picking again, aren't I?
-Cayt, unaffected? But Loki was so charming! *gets hit by the sarcasm faerie for blatant misuse*
-That little bit with the magic word was good. :)
-*in Mr.Bill voice* Ooo Noo! And just when he thought he was free of hair-balls forever...
-Lol, Loki sure knows how to piss a demon off.
-My only real critique, is that so far, I've found a few spots where you omit needed commas. Eh, not a big deal.
-Seven elevens are hell-holes, man. The one in my town has been robbed no less than twenty-two times in the past month. :P
-*laughs* That last action-oriented paragraph was priceless. *snickers again*
-Replying to your author's note, no, you didn't mess 'im up that much. besides a few little bugs, he sounded just like his normal, crusty self.
Murdok: You'd be 'crusty' too if you were changed into a cat, you horrid little-
Cait: I'm allergic to cats...now go back to your story.
Murdok: You've been working on chapter fourteen for no less than a month. It's getting boring being frozen in my own Hell-world...
Cait: Is this some sort of hint?
Murdok: No, not at all...
Cait: Oh, in that case...Hey!
Alright, excuse the pointless banter. I'll try not to clog up my reviews with too much junk in the future.
Good job, Fog. And thanks once again! *staggers away*
1The Grim AmentiaMerry Christmas, yo! From Cowtown, NY, heeeeeeeeerrres Cait!
*stumbles out with a carton of egg-nog* Heeys...yews coulda let meee finish it firs'...
Sorry, couldn't resist. That SNL skit is just too good. :P
Now, I'm going to be extra-tough on you this time. Murdok's a tough character to play, I think...so you better have done your homework. :P
Just kidding, of course. Not about the tough part, but...aww nevermind. Here goes...
-Nonchalant in the face of danger. I'm going to guess that he dies in three...two...one...
-Whoa! Holy monkeys, I was right! I was just kidding when I said that he was gonna die! *eyes bug out*
-Ah, the descriptions are still good. *hands over candy-cane* The dialog isn't half-bad either. Kudos, to ya'.
-Poor Dark Blade...Not quite a vote of confidence there...
-Yet another cool lookin' spell. I'm thinking of how much fun it would be to animate that...*drools on self*
-Ah, a good bit of character thought for Loki. That sort of thing adds so much more to a story. The contrasting thoughts show his reluctance quite well.
-I'm not that harsh, am I? :P Christmas seasons's effects, I guess...*chuckles*...Oh no...
-Apparently, Neia was not Murdok's only vampiric friend...*keeps reading*
-I know this is a nit-pick, but Murdok (at least in my story) has no 'c' in it. :P
-LOL, that sounds just like him. Raggedy old thing, he is. :P
-Ha! Log in another insert for me! *grins*
-Murdok's memory isn't *that* bad, but I suppose this is a bit in the future, so I'll let it slip. Good touch, though. I'm just being a bastard right now.
-'Nother cool reference...as well as a perfect response. Damn you.
-Ha, the back and forth between Murdok and Loki is great stuff!
-Oh, I oughta mention. When I drew LInn, I drew her in wolfish-form. Hope ya' don't mind. :P
-Yup, he doesn't seem very happy, does he?
-Curse you to the pits Fog! That was too freaking funny! A perfect Murdok-esque response...Perhaps he wouldn't use the word 'shit', but I guess when faced with three unwelcome visitors like these... Eh, I'm nit-picking again, aren't I?
-Cayt, unaffected? But Loki was so charming! *gets hit by the sarcasm faerie for blatant misuse*
-That little bit with the magic word was good. :)
-*in Mr.Bill voice* Ooo Noo! And just when he thought he was free of hair-balls forever...
-Lol, Loki sure knows how to piss a demon off.
-My only real critique, is that so far, I've found a few spots where you omit needed commas. Eh, not a big deal.
-Seven elevens are hell-holes, man. The one in my town has been robbed no less than twenty-two times in the past month. :P
-*laughs* That last action-oriented paragraph was priceless. *snickers again*
-Replying to your author's note, no, you didn't mess 'im up that much. besides a few little bugs, he sounded just like his normal, crusty self.
Murdok: You'd be 'crusty' too if you were changed into a cat, you horrid little-
Cait: I'm allergic to cats...now go back to your story.
Murdok: You've been working on chapter fourteen for no less than a month. It's getting boring being frozen in my own Hell-world...
Cait: Is this some sort of hint?
Murdok: No, not at all...
Cait: Oh, in that case...Hey!
Alright, excuse the pointless banter. I'll try not to clog up my reviews with too much junk in the future.
Good job, Fog. And thanks once again! *staggers away*
12/24/2002 c5 Elf mistresse Luinethondwen
Goooooooo! VAMPIRES! Really good story, really good.
Luinethondwen
Goooooooo! VAMPIRES! Really good story, really good.
Luinethondwen
12/14/2002 c4 35Krikoris
I love this story very very much! I can picture what is going on in my mind, and I like what I see! Keep it going ya'll!
35KrikorisI love this story very very much! I can picture what is going on in my mind, and I like what I see! Keep it going ya'll!
12/9/2002 c1 KluztyRogue
I wish I could continue this. It's hilarious! I love it so far and I can't wait till I can read the rest!
I wish I could continue this. It's hilarious! I love it so far and I can't wait till I can read the rest!
12/8/2002 c4 20Xelena
ARRRGHHHHHHHHHHH! that's not fair- i wanna know something else- are you two in the armed forces? cuase you know a helluva lot about rifles and pistols and lots of other types of guns. i admire that- it adds to the story- anyway, please update again ASAP!
20XelenaARRRGHHHHHHHHHHH! that's not fair- i wanna know something else- are you two in the armed forces? cuase you know a helluva lot about rifles and pistols and lots of other types of guns. i admire that- it adds to the story- anyway, please update again ASAP!
12/8/2002 c1 Guest
"This is assuming neither member has a blood disorder, such as sickle cell anemia"
Sickle cell anemia is a rare case in which the blood cells twist out of shape into a "sickle-shaped" cell and get clogged in the arteries. First, this has nothing to do with how fast the blood cells die. Secondly, this rare disease only appears in people of African descent. Are you suggesting the majority of vampires are African?
So please, don't try to get technical to make your story seem better. You will be dissapointed. As I am.
"This is assuming neither member has a blood disorder, such as sickle cell anemia"
Sickle cell anemia is a rare case in which the blood cells twist out of shape into a "sickle-shaped" cell and get clogged in the arteries. First, this has nothing to do with how fast the blood cells die. Secondly, this rare disease only appears in people of African descent. Are you suggesting the majority of vampires are African?
So please, don't try to get technical to make your story seem better. You will be dissapointed. As I am.
12/7/2002 c4 1The Grim Amentia
Sweet! ^.^ Pheather, I have to say, you're a master of action scenes. That little bit had me on the edge of my seat. Kudos! :)
1The Grim AmentiaSweet! ^.^ Pheather, I have to say, you're a master of action scenes. That little bit had me on the edge of my seat. Kudos! :)
12/7/2002 c4 2Tough Cookie
Bugger, ignore the other review, I hadn't realised you'd written more. Umm, its all good! V.cool.
2Tough CookieBugger, ignore the other review, I hadn't realised you'd written more. Umm, its all good! V.cool.
12/7/2002 c1 Tough Cookie
I love the end paragraph. Can't wait to see what is coming and what your vampire's will be like.
I love the end paragraph. Can't wait to see what is coming and what your vampire's will be like.
11/30/2002 c1 33Alchera
I've only read the first chapter so far, but it seems really good! Kind of amusing though, ya know, the whole idea of a vampire hunter's handbook. Haha!
Anway, uh... oh yeah! You left a review on my story The Chronicles of Lost Children saying you'd come back for another chapter, and I just wanted to let you know that I've uploaded two more. So if you wanna swing by, I'd appreciate it.
Thanks, and great job!
33AlcheraI've only read the first chapter so far, but it seems really good! Kind of amusing though, ya know, the whole idea of a vampire hunter's handbook. Haha!
Anway, uh... oh yeah! You left a review on my story The Chronicles of Lost Children saying you'd come back for another chapter, and I just wanted to let you know that I've uploaded two more. So if you wanna swing by, I'd appreciate it.
Thanks, and great job!
11/12/2002 c3 Guest
Sweet. ^.^
After drinking a pint of coffee (I kid you not. :P), I fear that I'm unable to put in anything coherent as of now. I'll be sure to put in a second review tomorrow, okay?
P.S. The dialog between characters is great; it beats mine by a longshot. :)
Sweet. ^.^
After drinking a pint of coffee (I kid you not. :P), I fear that I'm unable to put in anything coherent as of now. I'll be sure to put in a second review tomorrow, okay?
P.S. The dialog between characters is great; it beats mine by a longshot. :)
11/10/2002 c3 Hello
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! This is a realy good story. Please continue to write.
Bye Bye!
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! This is a realy good story. Please continue to write.
Bye Bye!
11/10/2002 c3 2Sabaye Leyr
Hey, this is great! I love the character Linn. Your characters are very well done and your writing style is great, too! I think, when you get this finished, you should look into getting it published. Again, excellent work.
2Sabaye LeyrHey, this is great! I love the character Linn. Your characters are very well done and your writing style is great, too! I think, when you get this finished, you should look into getting it published. Again, excellent work.
11/10/2002 c1 Nairesda
That was really good! I like the vampire's handbook and stuff, it's kind of funny. I like your style too, it fits what you're writing.
That was really good! I like the vampire's handbook and stuff, it's kind of funny. I like your style too, it fits what you're writing.