for Fog10/25/2003 c1 
37wingless
this is is beautiful, with some lovely descriptions. it reminds me a little bit of that poem about the fog creeping in on little cat feet (i cant remember what it's called or who it's by) but this poem has a much darker take on it all. good though, very good
37winglessthis is is beautiful, with some lovely descriptions. it reminds me a little bit of that poem about the fog creeping in on little cat feet (i cant remember what it's called or who it's by) but this poem has a much darker take on it all. good though, very good
3/8/2003 c1 206MoshiMoshiQueen
You're right there was a lot of lines, but I loved the poem so it did not matter.
206MoshiMoshiQueenYou're right there was a lot of lines, but I loved the poem so it did not matter.
11/23/2002 c1 5Melusine07
i like! very good descriptions. sorry i suck at reviews, but i think this is a good poem. hey, thanks for reviewing my story, i'm glad you liked it.
-morgan moonsphinx
5Melusine07i like! very good descriptions. sorry i suck at reviews, but i think this is a good poem. hey, thanks for reviewing my story, i'm glad you liked it.
-morgan moonsphinx
10/10/2002 c1 Crazygurl70 too lazy to sign in
OMG! THAt WAS SOOOOOO GOOD! Kinda creepy...BUT MUCHO GOOD, CHICA! LOL! I LOVED IT!
OMG! THAt WAS SOOOOOO GOOD! Kinda creepy...BUT MUCHO GOOD, CHICA! LOL! I LOVED IT!