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6/24/2001 c1 Nemain Hathcock
Hey I just read your story and truthfully it's less descriptive than a

history book. The story line is good but try writing it from a character's

point of view and tell what the characters going threw, his thoughts, what

he sees, what he smells, what he feels. After all, That's a novel!
3/28/2001 c1 4draganta
short, not thaat discriptive, but good.

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