for kiss of the blade2/26/2003 c1 
8PaperLanterns
Very well written. your rhyming is good, and doesn't sound at all forced, almost shakespearean.anyway, it was a little sad and maybe it hit a little too close to home than is comfortable. but other than that little depressing factor, well done.
8PaperLanternsVery well written. your rhyming is good, and doesn't sound at all forced, almost shakespearean.anyway, it was a little sad and maybe it hit a little too close to home than is comfortable. but other than that little depressing factor, well done.
11/3/2002 c1 Goat Woman
Yea, Self mutilation is bad, k! I know that you wouldn't but still. I have to do the 'I'm your best friend and if you do kill yourself i will bring you back to life and beat you to death with a spoon' thing. Ok! SO, this was amazing. don't be sad little bit! I think that i was sad enough for da both of us! lol
Love you nd love your work...stupid sarah making me rhyme...all the time! lol SEE, rhymin again!
Love Annie
Yea, Self mutilation is bad, k! I know that you wouldn't but still. I have to do the 'I'm your best friend and if you do kill yourself i will bring you back to life and beat you to death with a spoon' thing. Ok! SO, this was amazing. don't be sad little bit! I think that i was sad enough for da both of us! lol
Love you nd love your work...stupid sarah making me rhyme...all the time! lol SEE, rhymin again!
Love Annie