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4/21/2005 c17 16ThePenman
I gotta admit XENOGEARS is a great game.

'Merkava' is a very strong sounding name for a battleship too. As I see it, your story is exceptional and that is very impressive to me. So I'm going to head over to the second book and see what's happening over there. Once I finish, you can expect another review. Besides, I'll gladly review a story that was worth reading and this fits that category. Best of Luck on getting this published!
9/8/2004 c7 4Falkner
Hey, I know this story has been up for quite some time, a year I think, but I was just looking around and happened to see it. It's really good so far; I wish I could finish it now, but I have too much other stuff I should be doing. I'm a little confused about a few of the background things, but the characters are great. I'll finish reading this soon!
7/13/2004 c1 8Zygnus Windell
Well, I liked this. I see the Xenogears influence. I'll read more when I'm more awake.
11/2/2003 c17 Cockatiel
...It's finished? Already? ;_; Well, I loved it while it lasted. Not a lot of things were explained in the end though. Please say there'll be a sequel!

-On Cloud VII
11/1/2003 c17 Jave Harron
Pretty cool story. I love the religious themes, like Nephilim, Merkava, and so on. It reminds me of Xenogears, Xenosaga, Evangelion, and a few other things. That's a good thing, though. Keep it up. The new villain you've introduced is awesome. Characterization is good.

PS- I've used Nephilim before, but they're a Gnosis like race in my second novel, Shores of Eternity. It's relatively short, but I'd say it was somewhat decent. Oh, Project Atlas is updated.

As always, thanks for your time, and good writing.
9/13/2003 c1 622Jave Harron
I like this story. The protagonist seems like a good tragic hero so far. I like some of the technology as well. Electrodyne pages remind me of an article I read once.

Anyway, this story seems influenced by Neon Genesis Evangelion, Xenogears, and Xenosaga. Since your profile says you like Eva, that doesn't surprise me.

Trust me, that's a good thing. Anyway, I did a story you might like. It's called Project Atlas. It's also Eva-inspired, but with a few twists of my own... Thanks for you time. This is going on my favorites list.
8/15/2003 c1 David Campfield
sorry i have not had time to read up on your work i still think its godly though much better then mine i think i hope you never lose this gift of yours, dont forget you have to read mine when i actually read up to where you have finished im really thinking about posting my stuff here but im still not sure but good luck as always i will see you in school next week o and once you and the monkey get your site fully up tell me caz i want more people to get to read your writting and know more about you thanks for your friendship and great writting

your friend, David Campfield
8/9/2003 c1 Cockatiel
First let me say that this story is absolutely incredible. It reminds me greatly of Neon Genesis Evengelion, but it's still very original. Your descriptions of the Archons and the Devils are also very good. Oh, and if you are ever going to tell what happened to Gabriel's father, I think I've already figured it out...maybe :). Anyways, I am eager to see what awaits in the next chapter. Keep it up.

-On Cloud VII
8/3/2003 c1 1Tom Draeger
Very good work, I can't wait until the next installment. So far it's probably the best one I've seen. Keep it up.
7/23/2003 c9 2Kell Hound
great job keep writing
7/21/2003 c8 Jonny
Yay! Finally updated hehe. I have to say you've done a good job on all of the chapters so far, and I'd like to say that I really look forward to the rest of the story!
5/18/2003 c7 1Cross Bearer 73
Interesting story. Sounds a bit like Evangilion, and it also sounds like their Archon aredevils or something themselves.

Good so far, besides a tinybit of lack of information. But I think your holding that back on purpose.

Hurry up. You hold your audience captured.
1/19/2003 c5 1Pretend Jane
This is a really cool story.

I wonder how you thought this all up.

I'm a little confused with some parts, like the history and world. But I love it still.

Keep it up- I hope to see a update very soon!
1/17/2003 c5 1Hazel Bite
Oh, wow. That's about all I can say.
1/4/2003 c5 Nobody much
Scary. That was a really interesting and scary creature you used there. Very cool. Good descriptions too.
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