2/21/2003 c1 2JupGrrl
wow, i've never really read anything like this before. your metaphor use here is really something! what really send shivers down my spine was "Your eyes are now the sky.." incredible way of describing writing.

I enjoyed reading this very much, keep up the good work! :-)

10/16/2002 c1 1Ewacat
Rich, lyrical, in a total un-poem format;

It rawks. ^_^;;; Very cool.