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4/1/2004 c1 9Total Confusion
I noticed you because of your pen name. Ender's Shadow was a great book and so was Ender's Game. But this is an interesting poem and I like it.
12/29/2002 c1 Star7
two selfs sizing each other up, remembering and looking. trying to recognize the other face and then understanding. a great idea, well expressed. in almost all i've seen you do, love fuels these words. and that is beyond beautiful, something unique and untouchable. your final stanza was perfection, especially the sidenotes. you did a wonderful job. good self portrait.
12/10/2002 c1 40AvaRicE
Really amazing. I guess I can relate, as well. :)

I really like the end of the line when instead of 'He is me' you've put 'Me is he'.

Makes you think about it more.

Keep writing!
10/16/2002 c1 vers le sud
Wow! This is very...intricate. It's complicated, but once you read over it again, it makes a lot of sense. Your rhyme scheme is great. Keep writing!

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