for If Only6/10/2004 c1 Frostany
Haunting, you should try writing a novel, i bet it would be really good, i think that there's a lot of ways this story can be developed into something longer.
Haunting, you should try writing a novel, i bet it would be really good, i think that there's a lot of ways this story can be developed into something longer.
7/22/2003 c1 
59kep
Deep, conveys feeling really well. I like the part about her old friends saying hi especially. Very good.
59kepDeep, conveys feeling really well. I like the part about her old friends saying hi especially. Very good.
3/1/2003 c1 mELISSA
I'M KINDA LOST BUT IT'S ALL GOOD RIGHT? ANYWAYS IT'S GOOD FROM WHAT I CAN UNDERSTAND BUT I'M NOT REALLY "IN" IT TODAY SO
-LATER
I'M KINDA LOST BUT IT'S ALL GOOD RIGHT? ANYWAYS IT'S GOOD FROM WHAT I CAN UNDERSTAND BUT I'M NOT REALLY "IN" IT TODAY SO
-LATER
11/25/2002 c1 Melissa
OMG! this is really great!:) kinda sad(depressing) but really good!
OMG! this is really great!:) kinda sad(depressing) but really good!
10/18/2002 c1 36Self Inflicted
Hey, thanks for reviewing my story, so I'm here to return the favour, is it me or do we think the same lol. People are always asking me if I'm suicidal, but seriously, i'm not. Your grammar is a bit inconsitent, but otherwise you got talent, and good handling of the thoughts, your dialogue is good too. I can't really write good dialogue, which is why i normally use rambling of thoughts, this review is turning out longer than expected, oh well, thanks again for reviewing, go read me poems ya?
36Self InflictedHey, thanks for reviewing my story, so I'm here to return the favour, is it me or do we think the same lol. People are always asking me if I'm suicidal, but seriously, i'm not. Your grammar is a bit inconsitent, but otherwise you got talent, and good handling of the thoughts, your dialogue is good too. I can't really write good dialogue, which is why i normally use rambling of thoughts, this review is turning out longer than expected, oh well, thanks again for reviewing, go read me poems ya?
10/17/2002 c1 Tigger
OMG lav...that was so...sad.
now for the criticism...-lol-
hmmm...there's nothing to say!
It was really good...really morbid...but REALLY good.
-applauds-
OMG lav...that was so...sad.
now for the criticism...-lol-
hmmm...there's nothing to say!
It was really good...really morbid...but REALLY good.
-applauds-
10/16/2002 c1 morbid nirvana
i really like it
i really like it