10/23/2002 c1 24Johnny Madcap
EVIL FAIRIES! *Hides*

...Seriously though, an interesting story. Not too many spelling or grammer errors, and the formatting ain't half bad. Pretty funny, I'd like to see you continue this. My suggestion to you is to make your sentances flow a bit more, with commas and connecting words.

Sorry if my review wasn't all nice and sugar-coated, but I personally hate it when people say: "Good job, i lik it."

Bleh.

Also, please e-mail if you upload another chapter, I'd like to see more. Good work.

-Fog