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25MacNWoody
this was a good story and all...however, the grammar and spelling mistakes kind of distract the reader from the story. it might be a good idea to read over it again, or have a beta reader go over it. otherwise, loved the story
25MacNWoodythis was a good story and all...however, the grammar and spelling mistakes kind of distract the reader from the story. it might be a good idea to read over it again, or have a beta reader go over it. otherwise, loved the story
5/8/2006 c8 Funtime2006-2008
You should have called the story "TLC Man" *wink*. I love romance novels, and this rocked. ^^ Hope everything is well. Really good, I didn't see any grammar faults or spelling misstakes. Not that I'm as good on english as someone born with the language (I, myself, am Swedish). Good luck and have a nice day! ~Felicia
You should have called the story "TLC Man" *wink*. I love romance novels, and this rocked. ^^ Hope everything is well. Really good, I didn't see any grammar faults or spelling misstakes. Not that I'm as good on english as someone born with the language (I, myself, am Swedish). Good luck and have a nice day! ~Felicia
11/1/2005 c8 dOrKy-GuRl03
that was a good story...can't believe that its ends already...and i so totally loved it...well i have to got now..and that was a good ending too...well gotta go now..peace...:D...
that was a good story...can't believe that its ends already...and i so totally loved it...well i have to got now..and that was a good ending too...well gotta go now..peace...:D...
9/26/2005 c4 5Flutist
U no what, this so far is the best romance story that I have ever read on fictionpress. Great job and keep up the good work.
*~Ranya~*
5FlutistU no what, this so far is the best romance story that I have ever read on fictionpress. Great job and keep up the good work.
*~Ranya~*
6/11/2005 c8 emerald
aww so cute...publish it so that i can start adding them to my collection!
aww so cute...publish it so that i can start adding them to my collection!
2/27/2004 c8 fire-fem
This story was awesome! Definately one of your best! I love the sparks between Mel and Mac. You writing makes their love seem so real and not artificial. Also, good job on finishing your stories! I noticed most of your work is complete. I can tell you that all readers and reviewers appreciate that! It really stinks when an author does not update or finish their stories. However you seem to be pretty good with that so no worries there! Good job!
This story was awesome! Definately one of your best! I love the sparks between Mel and Mac. You writing makes their love seem so real and not artificial. Also, good job on finishing your stories! I noticed most of your work is complete. I can tell you that all readers and reviewers appreciate that! It really stinks when an author does not update or finish their stories. However you seem to be pretty good with that so no worries there! Good job!
9/9/2003 c8 BalooFairy
I loved it! It was just like reading a real romance novel, you should try publishing your work. :)
I loved it! It was just like reading a real romance novel, you should try publishing your work. :)
8/22/2003 c8 1Silver Scaled Dragon
Wow that was really good. I just have to ask what on earth does TLC mean?
1Silver Scaled DragonWow that was really good. I just have to ask what on earth does TLC mean?
8/19/2003 c8 TheReviewSovereign
Hey there. I'm one of those reviewers that you dread. Actually most people should. I'm impressed with your story. It takes a good line across a romance novel. If you ever wanted to you could turn this into a full romance novel. Good work, some grammer and spelling mistakes though. 7.034 out of 10.00
Hey there. I'm one of those reviewers that you dread. Actually most people should. I'm impressed with your story. It takes a good line across a romance novel. If you ever wanted to you could turn this into a full romance novel. Good work, some grammer and spelling mistakes though. 7.034 out of 10.00