for I Only Dance With You9/14/2004 c43 helpful critic
this another story that is just going around in circle. I think you lost your point or plot of the story long ago. Please end it or put in a plot with a plot.
this another story that is just going around in circle. I think you lost your point or plot of the story long ago. Please end it or put in a plot with a plot.
9/6/2004 c43 olivia
thanks so much for up dateing! i still love this story and i will keep waiting for the next update!
thanks so much for up dateing! i still love this story and i will keep waiting for the next update!
9/5/2004 c43 sam
yea this whole billy and sam thing needs to end b4 it goes ne farther thanks! lol. dude make sam not screw over joe please they r super cute 2gether. and u def need to keep writing bc well i have been dying to knows what happens and need to keep reading thanks! good job!
yea this whole billy and sam thing needs to end b4 it goes ne farther thanks! lol. dude make sam not screw over joe please they r super cute 2gether. and u def need to keep writing bc well i have been dying to knows what happens and need to keep reading thanks! good job!
8/16/2004 c42 Lidia
I hope that you update soon! Can't wait to read what happens next.
I hope that you update soon! Can't wait to read what happens next.
7/25/2004 c42 Lidia
I hope that you post soon. I wonder if his visitor is the "other" girl.
I hope that you post soon. I wonder if his visitor is the "other" girl.
7/23/2004 c42 
17Lady of romance world88
I'm so happy that she broke up with Evan and back together with Adam. Hooray. I realized that Sam and Joe hoped that Laura will be returned to Adam. It's worked. Who is the person? Why does Adam looked so shocked? Hurry update soon
17Lady of romance world88I'm so happy that she broke up with Evan and back together with Adam. Hooray. I realized that Sam and Joe hoped that Laura will be returned to Adam. It's worked. Who is the person? Why does Adam looked so shocked? Hurry update soon
7/19/2004 c42 olivia
well i just cant tell you people how sad i am to have to wait for the story to end. i really enjoyed it and i can definetly tell that you have real tallent. i hope u finish soon and ill be looking forward to it everyday!
well i just cant tell you people how sad i am to have to wait for the story to end. i really enjoyed it and i can definetly tell that you have real tallent. i hope u finish soon and ill be looking forward to it everyday!
7/18/2004 c4 olivia
i really am enjoying this so far. i can hardly stop reading and thats a lot to say consitering that i dont like to read!
i really am enjoying this so far. i can hardly stop reading and thats a lot to say consitering that i dont like to read!
7/18/2004 c3 olivia
OMG this is so cute! i just hope that hes not fakeing her out or anything!
OMG this is so cute! i just hope that hes not fakeing her out or anything!
7/18/2004 c2 olivia
this is in credibal and its only the second chapter. i just finished a book and i get confused about what happened in it which means that u have real tallent!
this is in credibal and its only the second chapter. i just finished a book and i get confused about what happened in it which means that u have real tallent!
7/18/2004 c1 olivia
this story is really interesting so far. i cant wait till i can read more.
this story is really interesting so far. i cant wait till i can read more.
7/12/2004 c42 sam
once again u ended it on a cliff hanger. this is starting to get to me missy! lol. i love adams mom, she is so awesome. and i guess i like adam again. this def needs to be a movie! and i think the visitor is gonna be eric? omg u def need to write the next one! please hurry. i need to u. u kill me kristen. it is so awesome. keep it up! :)
once again u ended it on a cliff hanger. this is starting to get to me missy! lol. i love adams mom, she is so awesome. and i guess i like adam again. this def needs to be a movie! and i think the visitor is gonna be eric? omg u def need to write the next one! please hurry. i need to u. u kill me kristen. it is so awesome. keep it up! :)