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6/6/2003 c1 
42CaitirI liked the pen one. The one about the shoe was funny, cause i can just picture somebody smelling this beat up old shoe and then writing a poem about it.
3/22/2003 c1 32MorbaneThe main impression I get from this is that you enjoy writing, or write for fun. Cool. I liked "East Coast Salsa" - I thought that was original - and "Pen" really chilled me. Nice.
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