Reviews: Jaryd | FictionPress

6/5/2003 c2

8Stallioness
Good good good come and read mine if you can (i hate saying that i feel so rude) Anyway keep writing ;)

6/5/2003 c1 Stallioness
You have startled me! This is good but is it true?

4/15/2003 c2

98Not Just a Little Girl
Wonderfully written, very emotional and generally brilliant!

Err, yeah i'm British... soo..?

-lani

10/24/2002 c1

18Kilshiara
This is awesome. Very emotional. Is it based on a real-life situation? If it isn't you have a wonderful imagination.

Pet peeve of mine... Please fix grammatical errors. They get in the way so much. (Then again, I'm the one who goes through published books with a red pen) I just hate it. It looks so unprofessional.

But the way you write is awesome. You are very talented.

10/24/2002 c1

7Divertida
I really enjoyed this poem, aside from the fact that the rhyme scheme is great, it was a real eye-opener as far as what it was about. In a word: great!

10/23/2002 c1

6Toad-Frog
This is really good! I like it a lot! You put it together very nicely. You going to do another chapter I hope! Check me out if you like and keep writing!