for Heart Of The Dragon12/7/2002 c8 siond
there is more, right? please say yes!*holds breath*
a little short, but good.
matane
there is more, right? please say yes!*holds breath*
a little short, but good.
matane
12/4/2002 c7 Amber Evans Potter
This was AWESOME! But how could you leave us hanging like that? ;( Anyway, please update! Happy late thanksgiving, kuanza, hanuka, or christmas (or any other holiday that I forgot). ^.^
This was AWESOME! But how could you leave us hanging like that? ;( Anyway, please update! Happy late thanksgiving, kuanza, hanuka, or christmas (or any other holiday that I forgot). ^.^
12/4/2002 c6 Amber Evans Potter
This is so awesome! ^.^' Sorry, I disappeared for a little while there. I love it so far! I'm going to go read the next chapter now. ^.^ Cya!
This is so awesome! ^.^' Sorry, I disappeared for a little while there. I love it so far! I'm going to go read the next chapter now. ^.^ Cya!
12/2/2002 c7 siond
Cliffhanger! not fair! though vey good, cif angers are evil. yay!, a pegasus they are soo rare in stories. next chapters
Matane
Cliffhanger! not fair! though vey good, cif angers are evil. yay!, a pegasus they are soo rare in stories. next chapters
Matane
11/24/2002 c6 Araceil
luv it keep writing no nah it isnt getting over discriptive i think its nice that some people take the time to tell every one where the main charater is properly keep it up gurl i like it
luv it keep writing no nah it isnt getting over discriptive i think its nice that some people take the time to tell every one where the main charater is properly keep it up gurl i like it
11/23/2002 c1 Kyouryoku Senshi
Great story, P.s. I'm sorry for putting you'r name up forgive me please!
Great story, P.s. I'm sorry for putting you'r name up forgive me please!
11/23/2002 c6 nightdragon0
over descriptive? No, I think it's just fine.
Heh, she's right too...more riddles.
over descriptive? No, I think it's just fine.
Heh, she's right too...more riddles.
11/16/2002 c5 nightdragon0
I think putting in more description did help out.
Still, I'm waiting to see who's 'helping' her out.
I think putting in more description did help out.
Still, I'm waiting to see who's 'helping' her out.
11/15/2002 c5 siond
yay! humm, more riddles the discriptions are getting better. and i think that some people might have found your 'flashes' confusing, but it is still very good and next chapters please.
matane
yay! humm, more riddles the discriptions are getting better. and i think that some people might have found your 'flashes' confusing, but it is still very good and next chapters please.
matane
11/11/2002 c4 
12Robin the Jarbog
Very nice. I have always had somewhat of an "obsession" with dragons, so of course I loved it. The story has great promise. I did find it a bit confusing at times (it seems to skip around a lot) and I think you could use more descriptions, but otherwise I think it is great. Keep up the good work!
12Robin the JarbogVery nice. I have always had somewhat of an "obsession" with dragons, so of course I loved it. The story has great promise. I did find it a bit confusing at times (it seems to skip around a lot) and I think you could use more descriptions, but otherwise I think it is great. Keep up the good work!