
11/9/2002 c4 Laurelen
Eeeeee! It's getting even better! Just one thing, though. Take a little more time to describe things (feeling, settings, etc.). Other than that, I think it's really awesome!
Eeeeee! It's getting even better! Just one thing, though. Take a little more time to describe things (feeling, settings, etc.). Other than that, I think it's really awesome!
11/3/2002 c3 nightdragon0
Wow, I can't wait to see where this is going.
Its a pretty nice riddle too. I have my thoughts about it, but I'll see.
Wow, I can't wait to see where this is going.
Its a pretty nice riddle too. I have my thoughts about it, but I'll see.
11/2/2002 c3 siond
humm... very intresting. i have an idea where this might be going but i can't wait for you to either take me there or prove me wrong. please continue. it is very good if a little short.
matane
humm... very intresting. i have an idea where this might be going but i can't wait for you to either take me there or prove me wrong. please continue. it is very good if a little short.
matane
11/2/2002 c3 Lady DreamMist
this might be my first time reading something else beside anime but damn i liked your story. . please continue the story, i'd love to read the rest.
this might be my first time reading something else beside anime but damn i liked your story. . please continue the story, i'd love to read the rest.
10/25/2002 c1 Araceil
kid i have no idea who u r but CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE please i love it^^
kid i have no idea who u r but CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE please i love it^^