6/27/2004 c2 1JDWrites
;_; *speechless* As my friends would say: "Holy Shit! You made Gaki cry!" I bow to your greatness...
;_; *speechless* As my friends would say: "Holy Shit! You made Gaki cry!" I bow to your greatness...
6/27/2004 c1 JDWrites
I LOVE IT! YAY! You read Gravi too? YAY! One of my dreams is to become a writer with this much talent, but of course, I have years to go...
I LOVE IT! YAY! You read Gravi too? YAY! One of my dreams is to become a writer with this much talent, but of course, I have years to go...
5/4/2004 c2 3smellslikerainbows
Oh, so sweet and, there's no other word, pretty. I loved the descriptions of dancers and emotions... Just all around a lovely story.
Oh, so sweet and, there's no other word, pretty. I loved the descriptions of dancers and emotions... Just all around a lovely story.
3/24/2004 c2 FujimitsuW
Oh so good. You should consider getting published
Oh so good. You should consider getting published
3/24/2004 c1 FujimitsuW
That was bloody awesome! It's so hard to find a good vampire story now. An it doesn't ramble on about nothing. Damn you Anne Rice
That was bloody awesome! It's so hard to find a good vampire story now. An it doesn't ramble on about nothing. Damn you Anne Rice
1/31/2004 c2 10Sara Ford
This chapter was even better, Dod it's so wondeful, your writing... I'm jelous, I wish I could write like that! This story os simply beautiful.
This chapter was even better, Dod it's so wondeful, your writing... I'm jelous, I wish I could write like that! This story os simply beautiful.
11/19/2003 c2 Nobody85
This story was beautiful! I don't think I've read anything that can compare to the descriptions and imagery! This story was just absolutely wonderful!
Great job!
This story was beautiful! I don't think I've read anything that can compare to the descriptions and imagery! This story was just absolutely wonderful!
Great job!
9/22/2003 c2 14peanutilover
Beautiful. I guess that just about sums it up. There were tantalizing hints that were much more satisfactory than actually descriptions of sex... you make it clear that it's not the physical action that matters so much as the feelings invoked and affirmed by it. If you weren't already on my favorite authors list, I would add you just for this. -
-peanutilover
Beautiful. I guess that just about sums it up. There were tantalizing hints that were much more satisfactory than actually descriptions of sex... you make it clear that it's not the physical action that matters so much as the feelings invoked and affirmed by it. If you weren't already on my favorite authors list, I would add you just for this. -
-peanutilover
9/17/2003 c2 sanguinejuly
beautiful, beautiful writing.
I also got confused a bit, I didn't know what to take literally and what to not take literally.
And you are a metaphoric queen.
*loves, loves, loves*
beautiful, beautiful writing.
I also got confused a bit, I didn't know what to take literally and what to not take literally.
And you are a metaphoric queen.
*loves, loves, loves*
9/9/2003 c2 ola
oh...
that was beautiful. i hope it's not the ned, but if it is, well then...it was an incredible story. you trully have talent. never stop writing.=)
oh...
that was beautiful. i hope it's not the ned, but if it is, well then...it was an incredible story. you trully have talent. never stop writing.=)
8/9/2003 c2 19NotEnough
*sighs* This is really rather beautiful. It's kind of happy but with an under tone of sadness.
I love the last two lines. Well, i love the whole thing, but the last two lines stand out.
Amazing.
*sighs* This is really rather beautiful. It's kind of happy but with an under tone of sadness.
I love the last two lines. Well, i love the whole thing, but the last two lines stand out.
Amazing.
8/9/2003 c1 NotEnough
I've never read a vampire fic before. They've never interested me, but i figured all your other stories have me hooked...and dammit, i really liked this one after i read it. Well this chapter...ahh you get what i mean.
I've never read a vampire fic before. They've never interested me, but i figured all your other stories have me hooked...and dammit, i really liked this one after i read it. Well this chapter...ahh you get what i mean.
8/2/2003 c2 5Seirvitas
aw...*sniff*...that was really sweet. I've been meaning to read some of your other stories but some of them are just so long so I figured I'd start with a shorter one and work my way up. *sniffle sniff sniff* It was sweet ^^ Funny...I was actually just thinking last night I wanted to write a short vampi fic...BLA! _ We must think alike just you are better at wonderful descriptions than me XD Oh well, it was beautiful as always.
~Centi
aw...*sniff*...that was really sweet. I've been meaning to read some of your other stories but some of them are just so long so I figured I'd start with a shorter one and work my way up. *sniffle sniff sniff* It was sweet ^^ Funny...I was actually just thinking last night I wanted to write a short vampi fic...BLA! _ We must think alike just you are better at wonderful descriptions than me XD Oh well, it was beautiful as always.
~Centi