for Hollow Glass6/13/2003 c1 briana
i actually really enjoyed this... a little different from what i would usually read ...
i liked it... thank you.
i actually really enjoyed this... a little different from what i would usually read ...
i liked it... thank you.
3/16/2003 c2 itoshii-youkai
wow. The entire fact that u never named them, makes it all the more..*sighs* no words to descirbes. The way u write and everything just flows together, like music, sweet vamipre music. Lol and the flowers! Gasps...the do bleed to not WAS GREAT!
*runs off in the fields*
wow. The entire fact that u never named them, makes it all the more..*sighs* no words to descirbes. The way u write and everything just flows together, like music, sweet vamipre music. Lol and the flowers! Gasps...the do bleed to not WAS GREAT!
*runs off in the fields*
12/2/2002 c2 
2Laughing Cat
Awww... That was so sweet, so different from the usual stories you wrote. I loved it!
2Laughing CatAwww... That was so sweet, so different from the usual stories you wrote. I loved it!
11/27/2002 c2 Kris
I like the two nameless creatures also!
I like them very much. You ::points straight at the author:: are one hell of a writer. Everything seems magnificent and special, the way you describe it. It's quite enthralling.
Please email me if you are going to update, I don't think i could get enough of this!
-Kris
I like the two nameless creatures also!
I like them very much. You ::points straight at the author:: are one hell of a writer. Everything seems magnificent and special, the way you describe it. It's quite enthralling.
Please email me if you are going to update, I don't think i could get enough of this!
-Kris
11/26/2002 c2 9r.mai
ouch for the bite. awww for the cuteness of it all. ^^;;; yeah, i know. i'm weird, anywhom, cya later! JAA! ^^
9r.maiouch for the bite. awww for the cuteness of it all. ^^;;; yeah, i know. i'm weird, anywhom, cya later! JAA! ^^
11/23/2002 c2 15Illian
Very cool! I was lost until the second star thing, hehe such a ditz I am ^^! But I loved it! *sniffles* All the love and blood and roses! Makes ya wanna go out and bite someone. Anyway, as *usual* it's lovely and I love it ^^!
~!shadow kei!~
15IllianVery cool! I was lost until the second star thing, hehe such a ditz I am ^^! But I loved it! *sniffles* All the love and blood and roses! Makes ya wanna go out and bite someone. Anyway, as *usual* it's lovely and I love it ^^!
~!shadow kei!~
11/22/2002 c1 TikiraSatori Opaque
Cool story. There aren't many who don't use names at all... Not that it isn't good. Good job!
Cool story. There aren't many who don't use names at all... Not that it isn't good. Good job!
11/9/2002 c1 6the blind visionary
nice^^ you are very good at description, and you included a clever metaphor, which gave the story purpose and depth. it was a nice turn from the cliched vampire stuff you see floating 'round the net these days. ^_^
6the blind visionarynice^^ you are very good at description, and you included a clever metaphor, which gave the story purpose and depth. it was a nice turn from the cliched vampire stuff you see floating 'round the net these days. ^_^
11/9/2002 c1 6Lux Alexander
That was very sweet and well-written. Kind of intoxicating, really. I like the lyrical tone of your writing, and the allusions you make. If you do choose to continue this, I'm looking forward to it.
6Lux AlexanderThat was very sweet and well-written. Kind of intoxicating, really. I like the lyrical tone of your writing, and the allusions you make. If you do choose to continue this, I'm looking forward to it.
10/29/2002 c1 midsleep
ahh, beautiful language! wondrous indeed. it's so refreshing to read something that seems old handled in such a delicate manner.
ahh, beautiful language! wondrous indeed. it's so refreshing to read something that seems old handled in such a delicate manner.
10/27/2002 c1 15Illian
...My heart, just exploded o_o I loved it so much! I must have more vampireness! Write more vampireness! Now, do it, noooowww! This was great, wonderful! I loved it! I can't say anything other than it was awesome!
~!shadow kei!~
15Illian...My heart, just exploded o_o I loved it so much! I must have more vampireness! Write more vampireness! Now, do it, noooowww! This was great, wonderful! I loved it! I can't say anything other than it was awesome!
~!shadow kei!~
10/27/2002 c1 4Schu no ko
Wow, your writing is so...*searches for word*...good doesn't do it justice. Fantastic sounds too flowery. (I really do mean to review your other works, but I still haven't finished reading them, what with school and all)
I really enjoy how descriptive you get (if I only had half of your talent...) and your imagry is wonderful as well.
In this one, I also liked the fact that your characters didn't have names. I love when people write like that.
All in all, very nice!
4Schu no koWow, your writing is so...*searches for word*...good doesn't do it justice. Fantastic sounds too flowery. (I really do mean to review your other works, but I still haven't finished reading them, what with school and all)
I really enjoy how descriptive you get (if I only had half of your talent...) and your imagry is wonderful as well.
In this one, I also liked the fact that your characters didn't have names. I love when people write like that.
All in all, very nice!
10/27/2002 c1 Starglass
Uhh. I need me a vampire. XD
It's your usual... high... fantastic standard. VERY vivd - I love the way you play with colour and hot/cold! It's easy to imagine, and it's so... well, thick. Except not stupid-thick. Thick as in it's lush and dreamy and not easy to disentangle yourself from. It's wonderful. I have to say, there was one line that I didn't like, but I trawled through it all again (SUCH A CHORE! *rolls eyes* ^_~) and I couldn't find it. Sometimes your descriptions are rather heavy, but otherwise, it's awesome. *Sigh*
*Hobbles away*
Uhh. I need me a vampire. XD
It's your usual... high... fantastic standard. VERY vivd - I love the way you play with colour and hot/cold! It's easy to imagine, and it's so... well, thick. Except not stupid-thick. Thick as in it's lush and dreamy and not easy to disentangle yourself from. It's wonderful. I have to say, there was one line that I didn't like, but I trawled through it all again (SUCH A CHORE! *rolls eyes* ^_~) and I couldn't find it. Sometimes your descriptions are rather heavy, but otherwise, it's awesome. *Sigh*
*Hobbles away*
10/26/2002 c1 Caton Kadokawa
That was simply marvelous! I adored the way you used descriptions. I could almost hear the beat of the music when you described it, and almost taste the wine. Okay, I couldn't taste the wine because I've never had a drop of it in my life because my family has the curse of being allergic to alcohol, but still! It was wonderfully written, and I truly enjoyed it. Whether this is a one parter or a chaptered fic, it's great!
That was simply marvelous! I adored the way you used descriptions. I could almost hear the beat of the music when you described it, and almost taste the wine. Okay, I couldn't taste the wine because I've never had a drop of it in my life because my family has the curse of being allergic to alcohol, but still! It was wonderfully written, and I truly enjoyed it. Whether this is a one parter or a chaptered fic, it's great!