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4/11/2003 c1 lady marmite
nice. i like the little bit at the end, its something that you really don't expect!
3/22/2003 c1 aiyah
um..great way of describing life?
3/14/2003 c1 8Kezkay
yiyashani, thanks for reviewing my fic MRL. I decided to try something different for a change and read a poem. Incredibly peace inspiring. It made me long for summer and the beach again. Aie, I'm sick of this winter. I loved your ending, totally unexpected, nice twist towards humor.
2/16/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
great poem! i like it! very good imagery! poor horse. hmm, well, good job on this! keep writing!
2/13/2003 c1 Minerva
Very pretty in the beginning. The ending.I dunno (I said the word!) but it made me laugh.
2/9/2003 c1 29Raging Angel of White
or you could have called it 'typical' or 'murphy's law'. i had a murphy's law day today, actually. anyrate, offtrack again. it really was good and i had to smile at the end.

btw, thanx for the review, even though it was one of my lousy poems. I think the feeling may have been quesiness :). peace, luv and killer rubber duckies,

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