4/11/2003 c1 lady marmite
nice. i like the little bit at the end, its something that you really don't expect!
nice. i like the little bit at the end, its something that you really don't expect!
3/22/2003 c1 aiyah
um..great way of describing life?
um..great way of describing life?
3/14/2003 c1 8Kezkay
yiyashani, thanks for reviewing my fic MRL. I decided to try something different for a change and read a poem. Incredibly peace inspiring. It made me long for summer and the beach again. Aie, I'm sick of this winter. I loved your ending, totally unexpected, nice twist towards humor.
yiyashani, thanks for reviewing my fic MRL. I decided to try something different for a change and read a poem. Incredibly peace inspiring. It made me long for summer and the beach again. Aie, I'm sick of this winter. I loved your ending, totally unexpected, nice twist towards humor.
2/16/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
great poem! i like it! very good imagery! poor horse. hmm, well, good job on this! keep writing!
great poem! i like it! very good imagery! poor horse. hmm, well, good job on this! keep writing!
2/13/2003 c1 Minerva
Very pretty in the beginning. The ending.I dunno (I said the word!) but it made me laugh.
Very pretty in the beginning. The ending.I dunno (I said the word!) but it made me laugh.
2/9/2003 c1 29Raging Angel of White
or you could have called it 'typical' or 'murphy's law'. i had a murphy's law day today, actually. anyrate, offtrack again. it really was good and i had to smile at the end.
btw, thanx for the review, even though it was one of my lousy poems. I think the feeling may have been quesiness :). peace, luv and killer rubber duckies,
or you could have called it 'typical' or 'murphy's law'. i had a murphy's law day today, actually. anyrate, offtrack again. it really was good and i had to smile at the end.
btw, thanx for the review, even though it was one of my lousy poems. I think the feeling may have been quesiness :). peace, luv and killer rubber duckies,