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7/6/2003 c1 AniRuLeS
No offense but...it's partly bad. I mean, who ever heard of hypnotists as criminals. Or why go after Tom? Did he do anything against them? But the looking for them part seemes good.
1/2/2002 c1 29Katterree Fengari
Oo, the corn field...TOm Died! Ya! Doomed he was...evilly said Susie, DOOM! ...^_^ its ok
8/26/2001 c1 Princess Of Quake
Short but it hit me! O.o
11/14/2000 c1 Jad
It was good. A few dry parts here and there, but an overall good read.
11/1/2000 c1 Cera
A bit...erm...unbelievable I guess would be the word. Also it left some loose ends. Why were the hypnotists after Tom specifically? What sort of stupid insane person would actually go /look/ for a couple murderers? Coulda used more plot development and characterizations.
11/1/2000 c1 Taitofan
Yipes! I'd be scared out of my wits! Great, and scary, job!

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