12/29/2007 c4 chocaholic92
I think this story is pretty cool...I enjoyed reading these chapters...but you haven't updated in so long! please do update! Its a nice story.
I think this story is pretty cool...I enjoyed reading these chapters...but you haven't updated in so long! please do update! Its a nice story.
12/23/2004 c4 Anarkali
Argghh! Love this story! Worst thing is, you take a long time in updating it. I have aged exactly 2 years and 3 days since u last updated. Um...about the boy...it's Vermo, yes? and umm...he was hit by a dagger, not an arrow. But great chapter anyway - like always. :) update soon!
Argghh! Love this story! Worst thing is, you take a long time in updating it. I have aged exactly 2 years and 3 days since u last updated. Um...about the boy...it's Vermo, yes? and umm...he was hit by a dagger, not an arrow. But great chapter anyway - like always. :) update soon!
10/24/2004 c4 hobbes
OH my gosh it was so cool. like i was reading and it was one of the best stories i have read in a long time. and if u could , would u please email me when u update that way i can read and reveiw as soon as possible
OH my gosh it was so cool. like i was reading and it was one of the best stories i have read in a long time. and if u could , would u please email me when u update that way i can read and reveiw as soon as possible
8/12/2004 c4 roni
haha! loove it!
i really hope someones gonna update this story, cuz its awesome! doesnt look like it though.. sigh.. and it was starting to get intersting!
lol, oh well
anyways, i really hope you do decide to go on with the story and i would totally read it if you did decide to do that.. read it with relish, might i add!
yea.. my point is that its awesome stuff and id like to know what happens!
~roni
haha! loove it!
i really hope someones gonna update this story, cuz its awesome! doesnt look like it though.. sigh.. and it was starting to get intersting!
lol, oh well
anyways, i really hope you do decide to go on with the story and i would totally read it if you did decide to do that.. read it with relish, might i add!
yea.. my point is that its awesome stuff and id like to know what happens!
~roni
5/8/2004 c4 hummer
Your story's super duper awsome! M... sho cool... anyway.. hope you guys update soon!
Your story's super duper awsome! M... sho cool... anyway.. hope you guys update soon!
4/17/2003 c4 38Catticus
Cool. I like how two different authors are writing the same story from two different point of views. Keep it up, both of you! cheers
Cool. I like how two different authors are writing the same story from two different point of views. Keep it up, both of you! cheers
3/23/2003 c4 Violet Sunset
hey, im actually know to you guys as PandaBear4762 *wink wink*, but i decided to write my own story! *cough read it cough*
yay! i love this one, very kool. although im confused , who was the guy Layla saved? and how is it connected to Fiona? write more!
hey, im actually know to you guys as PandaBear4762 *wink wink*, but i decided to write my own story! *cough read it cough*
yay! i love this one, very kool. although im confused , who was the guy Layla saved? and how is it connected to Fiona? write more!
1/24/2003 c4 3Blazing-moon
*hits herself repeatedly with a large bat* It wasn't like I forgot about this! But I just could never get around to reviewing...or maybe it's that I have this laziness built into me, and I think I can do it 'tomorrow'. :( :( :( This is writing at its best :) This story is one of my favorites!
-Blaze
P.S.: NEVER see Darkness Falls. I hated it. :)
*hits herself repeatedly with a large bat* It wasn't like I forgot about this! But I just could never get around to reviewing...or maybe it's that I have this laziness built into me, and I think I can do it 'tomorrow'. :( :( :( This is writing at its best :) This story is one of my favorites!
-Blaze
P.S.: NEVER see Darkness Falls. I hated it. :)
12/23/2002 c4 SkyIsle1
This chapter was pretty short but nicely done nevertheless. I've been coming back to fanfiction.net just to check on your stories and it's way way way not disappointing! Both of you make a really good team. Keep it up and God Bless!
This chapter was pretty short but nicely done nevertheless. I've been coming back to fanfiction.net just to check on your stories and it's way way way not disappointing! Both of you make a really good team. Keep it up and God Bless!
12/21/2002 c4 Elizabeth Ski Faun
Wow! When she walked into the alley i figured that she would meet him. I was right! He should take her to Fiona now, or maybe later. Or something around those lines. This story is on my fave stories list, and whenever i get on the internet i check for updates! Thanx:)
Wow! When she walked into the alley i figured that she would meet him. I was right! He should take her to Fiona now, or maybe later. Or something around those lines. This story is on my fave stories list, and whenever i get on the internet i check for updates! Thanx:)
12/21/2002 c1 SkyIsle1
Gosh! What a cool story! Only the first chapter and I'm liking it already! Please add more and more! Woo-hoo!
Gosh! What a cool story! Only the first chapter and I'm liking it already! Please add more and more! Woo-hoo!
12/9/2002 c3 Elizabeth Ski Faun
ohhhh. He died, right? Or is he only unconcious? Anyway, it was great, keep writing, you guys, and Tessandra, you have GOT to hurry up on "Of humans and faries" b/c if not i'll go out of my mind!
Oh, and did you notice you added an "h" to Ariya/Ariyah's name near the end of the chapter?
Anyway, Thanx:)
ohhhh. He died, right? Or is he only unconcious? Anyway, it was great, keep writing, you guys, and Tessandra, you have GOT to hurry up on "Of humans and faries" b/c if not i'll go out of my mind!
Oh, and did you notice you added an "h" to Ariya/Ariyah's name near the end of the chapter?
Anyway, Thanx:)