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7/10/2003 c1 20forever-blues
haha .. cute
3/10/2003 c1 16Pear
Very dramatic! It sounds like it's coming from a person in love. ^^ One suggestion is that if you applied rhyme to the first two stanza, use rhyme for the rest of the peom. It sounds very smooth though. Good job.
2/5/2003 c1 1Naori
super. very like Jordan chan's song. hehe.
1/16/2003 c1 1215
i liked the fist two lines the best. "‹
12/8/2002 c1 C.J. Beck
hahhaha!
12/3/2002 c1 swt-angel-babi3
it's the perfect poem to read.
11/5/2002 c1 2Luri
very cute!
11/3/2002 c1 hermione86
the great and romantic poem do u hv. quite funny. r u chinese?
10/30/2002 c1 7Songstress Lenne
^_^ I liked this poem, no, I loved this poem a LOT! ^_^ If you would, please update more!

Excellent Work!

~~Sorceress Yuna~~
10/29/2002 c1 Melody
This seems to be like a song, it has really straightforward thoughts and quite a bit joyful romance feeling. This person seemed to be very imaginative and optimistic! GOOD WORK!

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