for I hate you6/10/2003 c1 
98Braddhadair
~this might sound a little odd, but this is a beautiful poem. regardless that it has to do with hatred and dispostion, it was really good.~
98Braddhadair~this might sound a little odd, but this is a beautiful poem. regardless that it has to do with hatred and dispostion, it was really good.~
1/20/2003 c1 57bubblesbeccka
this is good. Don't be afraid to let your emotions out more often they drive the poetry form your mind on to paper. keep the writing up especially when you feel down!
57bubblesbecckathis is good. Don't be afraid to let your emotions out more often they drive the poetry form your mind on to paper. keep the writing up especially when you feel down!
1/6/2003 c1 67Poisoned
They are wrong...Its a wonderful poem and expresses your feelings very clearly. Poetry *is* all about emotion and I think negative emotions can lead to a lot of great poems.
67PoisonedThey are wrong...Its a wonderful poem and expresses your feelings very clearly. Poetry *is* all about emotion and I think negative emotions can lead to a lot of great poems.
12/12/2002 c1 pennylane
whoever wrote that couldn't be more wrong. isnt emotion the whole point of poetry in the first place? anyways..i really like this one you describe everything so beautifully so whoever reads it can really feel what you mean. good job!
whoever wrote that couldn't be more wrong. isnt emotion the whole point of poetry in the first place? anyways..i really like this one you describe everything so beautifully so whoever reads it can really feel what you mean. good job!
10/30/2002 c1 9A Lover Lost
so... you don't like it. *shrugs* okay, i can deal with that. but it holds a lot of emotion for me, and has a rythm. -i- like it, and that's what counts.
9A Lover Lostso... you don't like it. *shrugs* okay, i can deal with that. but it holds a lot of emotion for me, and has a rythm. -i- like it, and that's what counts.
10/30/2002 c1 me
Why do some people think venting is poetry? Just because you're having strong feelings doesn't mean it's poetry. "Depressing" poetry is so unoriginal nowadays.
Why do some people think venting is poetry? Just because you're having strong feelings doesn't mean it's poetry. "Depressing" poetry is so unoriginal nowadays.