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11/4/2002 c1 50Kittioto
... Awwww! That was so... warm! And fuzzy! Cuuute. ^_^ Happy little poem! ~Claps~ ... Which is perhaps a good thing, for I've been somewhat sour lately. :p But enough of that, this was good! ~Pats Catgirl on the head~

"Perfect is existance" ... interesting last line. Even a couple, three or four different possible meanings to it. Last lines should be, or at least I think they should be, thought-provoking. It sort of adds a nice little essence before you hit the review button. ^_^ Yay! (GAH, now I'm all cheery... SEE WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME!)

HEY! I just thought I'd drop a line sense you seemed to like my Piccolo poems so much... that I added a couple more. They're a little happier. ^_^ REALLY, I CAN MAKE HAPPY PICCOLO POEMS! ... I can..! LOL. :)

Keep writing!
10/30/2002 c1 Needa S
Good job! R&R me sometime and keep writing!

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