for Tale of the Wanderer9/8/2003 c1 
3Saberpilot
This was excellent- I can't wait to read the next chapter, whenever it would happen to be added! ^_^ I love CherrY! (^_~ I know that's not how it's spelled, but hey..)
3SaberpilotThis was excellent- I can't wait to read the next chapter, whenever it would happen to be added! ^_^ I love CherrY! (^_~ I know that's not how it's spelled, but hey..)
11/4/2002 c1 Guest
Very good start to a unique and promising story. Be careful with the dialogue though, because in some parts it tends to sound a little too modern. I also think it needs a bit more description and details, but you definately have the beginnings of a great story here.
Very good start to a unique and promising story. Be careful with the dialogue though, because in some parts it tends to sound a little too modern. I also think it needs a bit more description and details, but you definately have the beginnings of a great story here.