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10/14/2004 c1 Cymoril Avalon
Your poetry flows very, very well. You are able to keep a consistent beat, which it tough to do. However, the line "To none land or sky" doesn't really seem to fit. I'm not sure what you were trying to convey there.
Sigh. You seem to write such sad stuff.
9/10/2004 c1 Danielle
All of your writing is very good although this one stuck out to me alot. Good job.
5/23/2004 c1 5C.W. Sims
Hmm. I had to read this one twice-it is very shifty. However, you had very good metaphors. Beef it up a little, and you'll have yet another work of art, but it is mediocre in it's present state.
4/19/2004 c1 6Ganondork
Woah...
A lot of the poems are depressing, but yours is the most of all! I'm not sure if that is a compliment or not, but the poem is good.
4/2/2004 c1 12jacobcello
This brought tears to my eyes. REALLY! tell me if u hate me for reviewing but personally, i think this was a good poem to rhyme.
Aurevoir, until i R&R again
jacobcello
9/15/2003 c1 SupaFireCross
You reviewd one of mine so I decided to come give you a visit. I really like your poetrt as well. As far as my preferences, I'm not a big fan of structure and meter in poetry, but I really like the emotion and color of yours. Well done! And thanks for reviewing mine!
1/11/2003 c1 10Incruentus
Perfect. It speaks a sad truth, a truth too painful for some to even acknowledge. It's good.
11/10/2002 c1 RainyDayz1
VERY deep. You have an awesome talent when it comes to writing poetry. Keep it up and you will go far.

~Azalea
11/2/2002 c1 RB3
You wrote a beautiful poem. I believe they call that style of poem a quatrain.
11/1/2002 c1 Cheysuli
I could HEAR the poem as I read it. It's so beautiful.
11/1/2002 c1 176DefianceIsMe
That was short but sweet as the saying goes. In those few words you described it all so well. Good job. ^_^
10/31/2002 c1 11ZinSs
that was good! very good

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