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12/29/2002 c1 Star7
two figures in the rain, one crying and one unable to help. it's nice how you made the sky's tears fall with the other person's, making it see more terrible. good back-up. good honesty in it, but the ending was a bit weak. prolly because i dislike the word 'good' but it was a sad but loving poem. one of those i-love-you-but-can't-help-yous. and your storm metaphor really strengthened it. nicely done.

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