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3/8/2003 c1 73koruneko
very nice. it describes how everyone wants to have a certain someone to love.
12/29/2002 c1 Star7
pretty good. sweet beginning, the ultimate show of love. second was interesting, i like your ideas with outcomes, very realistic touch. third was cute, like a reponse to a marriage proposal with that touch of sadness (great word 'irky'). endearing ending, the ever-waiting, ever-faithful lover. sweet, short, and full of love. a classic.
12/10/2002 c1 90SweetGrape
The summary was intriguing:)

Very sweet and sorrowful first stanza.

Very offbeat, wistful and hopeful- 'all I want is you by my side' feels heartfelt and honest.

Yearning and wishing for your company- very sweet and sad.

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