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5/8/2003 c1 1Elij
I enjoyed the mild rhyming scheme. Thoughtfully compelling, short poem.

One nit...the word should be "flies".

Nice piece.

Nicole (Elij) :-)
11/24/2002 c1 32The Lady of Shallott
Very powerfully and well written. You write really thoughtfully.

*Flies, not fly's.

-Em

PS- Thank you for the review.
11/7/2002 c1 295schande
Very descriptive for such a sortly written poem. I enjoyed it though I must say ^_~

P.s. ty for reviewing my poetry. oh yea, nice pen name lol
11/7/2002 c1 themoongoeson
*looks to the right... then to the left* Why has only one person reviewd other than me?

Anywho... GREAT POEM! Very true. Keep it up and keep writing more poems. I will look forward to them.
11/7/2002 c1 Usagi-hime
I so agree...great job!

Usa-hime

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