for Humanity5/8/2003 c1 
1Elij
I enjoyed the mild rhyming scheme. Thoughtfully compelling, short poem.
One nit...the word should be "flies".
Nice piece.
Nicole (Elij) :-)
1ElijI enjoyed the mild rhyming scheme. Thoughtfully compelling, short poem.
One nit...the word should be "flies".
Nice piece.
Nicole (Elij) :-)
11/24/2002 c1 32The Lady of Shallott
Very powerfully and well written. You write really thoughtfully.
*Flies, not fly's.
-Em
PS- Thank you for the review.
32The Lady of ShallottVery powerfully and well written. You write really thoughtfully.
*Flies, not fly's.
-Em
PS- Thank you for the review.
11/7/2002 c1 295schande
Very descriptive for such a sortly written poem. I enjoyed it though I must say ^_~
P.s. ty for reviewing my poetry. oh yea, nice pen name lol
295schandeVery descriptive for such a sortly written poem. I enjoyed it though I must say ^_~
P.s. ty for reviewing my poetry. oh yea, nice pen name lol
11/7/2002 c1 themoongoeson
*looks to the right... then to the left* Why has only one person reviewd other than me?
Anywho... GREAT POEM! Very true. Keep it up and keep writing more poems. I will look forward to them.
*looks to the right... then to the left* Why has only one person reviewd other than me?
Anywho... GREAT POEM! Very true. Keep it up and keep writing more poems. I will look forward to them.