for Not Forgotten9/16/2003 c1 Topher
Awesome, incredibly awesome Kari. The emotion I got from this is just amazing. Excellent job.
Awesome, incredibly awesome Kari. The emotion I got from this is just amazing. Excellent job.
3/20/2003 c1 
219RNL
Wow, powerful poem, I like it. I've just got back on line after almost a year, and getting thru my reviews and putting up new stuff. Come R&R sometime?
219RNLWow, powerful poem, I like it. I've just got back on line after almost a year, and getting thru my reviews and putting up new stuff. Come R&R sometime?
1/7/2003 c1 Paradoxical Goddess
Put stupidly, in my words, high school sucks. Thanks for the poem. :)
Put stupidly, in my words, high school sucks. Thanks for the poem. :)
11/13/2002 c1 Liller
THIS IS THE BEST! love the lines "If only I could shed a tear" and "see my heart break on the floor" omgoodness this is so beautiful! i didnt know you were back on naursul. sorry i havent reviewed. a)havent had time and b) forgot your pen name. so glad i checked up becaue this is so pretty!
THIS IS THE BEST! love the lines "If only I could shed a tear" and "see my heart break on the floor" omgoodness this is so beautiful! i didnt know you were back on naursul. sorry i havent reviewed. a)havent had time and b) forgot your pen name. so glad i checked up becaue this is so pretty!
11/7/2002 c1 Awkward Silence
That was beautiful.
That was beautiful.
11/5/2002 c1 Ragnarok
Kari this is great. I can relate to a lot of what you say here. Such as "I wish that I could wake to find that all of this is but a dream" and "I am always there for the world and if I broke down and sobbed there would be no one there for me." It's like you're saying that you do your best to support others when they need it but when it comes time for them to support you, they let you down. Sometimes I feel that way too. It certainly doesn't help at all does it? But this is really great Kari, it describes a ton of emotions that we all feel from time to time.
Kari this is great. I can relate to a lot of what you say here. Such as "I wish that I could wake to find that all of this is but a dream" and "I am always there for the world and if I broke down and sobbed there would be no one there for me." It's like you're saying that you do your best to support others when they need it but when it comes time for them to support you, they let you down. Sometimes I feel that way too. It certainly doesn't help at all does it? But this is really great Kari, it describes a ton of emotions that we all feel from time to time.