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3/24/2003 c2 spunk in love
This is pretty interesting. You really need to add more. Its been so long since you have added anything I would really apreciate more.
12/17/2002 c2 Anna Banana
the second chapter is a repeat of the first one, just so you know.
12/1/2002 c1 59kep
Awesome. That's really good. Can't wait to read more. It's a neat concept too, the good guy being sort of pitted against someone else who is good too; just different. Your characters have a great depth to them, without having streams of description. Hope you write more.
11/22/2002 c1 Hindi Sad Diamonds too tired to login
This is really great so far! Vampire stories are fantastical, and I'm really intrigued. This is great!

-wuv from the hindi-
11/13/2002 c1 7Esaema
You have a nice writing style. Please, please write more.
11/13/2002 c1 Chiquita Banana
Yes, hello young writer...your story is magnificient your detail on the characters is simple but detailed...I am able to make them out perfectly and not become bored in the process...

i find the tempo to be good and upkeep to keep the mind from wandering...

try and devlop more chapters of the same frame this would tie the who paper together and make it a great book...

cant wait to find more of your work you may just be a writer yet..i love finding new authors out there
11/13/2002 c1 Marie
Hey...this was like so cool...yeah girl i jsut love all kinds of things like this it makes the head swimming with thoughts...um..and like yeah that chick sounds so like me..and oh my god i wish i had a guy that looked just like him i would like never leave my house...screw school..

anyway cant wait for more and i wish there was a future love thing with the people...yeah baby...

you and me baby aint nothing but mammal so lets do it like they do on the discovery channel...

:) :0 :X yeah chicka keep it flowing...
11/13/2002 c1 Dawn
This is great. I love the characters. It is a lot of fun to read. I will tell all of my friends about it.
11/12/2002 c1 Julienne
hey, like wow...this was so great...the suspense is killing...(Literally)..hee hee hee...anyway...love the plot...that guy sounds kindof hot...wonder whats gonna happen...

anyway best of luck and cant wait to see the next chapters...so hurry up (not rushing or nothing...)
11/7/2002 c1 Guest
This is very interesting. Keep writing I want to know what happens next.
11/6/2002 c1 Redlily4
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Okay, the story was fab...great job..i cant wait to see what happens next...love everything that you have done to it...cant wait for more...

oh and like on the last real sentence with the (know) yeah...ya need to make it "known"...just thought that you should know that...

anyway thank ya chica for everything...
11/5/2002 c1 52M. Fitzgerald
A few errors but since I’m doing horribly with my latest story I’ll say nothing more :)

You’ve certainly raised my curiosity, and I’ll be back when you have a bit more.

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