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4/17/2005 c1 55Lellida
I like the dreamscape you described here, it's very uh..dreamy and even though it's random it's not confusing.
9/16/2001 c1 ELIJAH BURKS IV
IT TOOK KIM TO HELP ME FIGURE THIS ONE OUT. "DREAMSTATE HUH?" I INITIALLY INTERPRETED IT TO MEAN THAT THE ITALICS WERE THE ACTUAL DREAMSTATE, BUT KIM CORRECTED ME. VERY GOOD WRITING VICK.

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7/7/2001 c1 Neongene
HAH! cool, that has happened to me so MANY times...oh well, you write very good in the first person. 3rd person has always been a bit harder. Good work I promise to read your others.
7/3/2001 c1 1Ciircee
It's a very realistic story. Isn't it a drag to dream about work? :) I love the scene where you fall asleep; it's something I've actually done. Great work!
2/23/2001 c1 8Mystery Squeezit
Ah! I hate those little goober dreams that happen when I nod off in class or something! Aaaack! The non-sensical feel to this was very dream like. You should write more stories! They're so good!
1/19/2001 c1 Goz
*clap, clap* That definitely captures the way *my* dreams feel. People never write dream sequences that sound real - afraid the readers won't understand them, apparently. (Irritants.) As for falling asleep writing, I tried to write a Pokemon fic after staying up until midnight reading "Battle Angel Alita". Disturbingly violent results - I'll never look at Richie the same way again...
1/5/2001 c1 2Walks-the-Umbra
Can't say I've ever had that sort of thing happen to e, but I can understand where you're coming from there. ^_^ Very nice writing style you have. I really enjoyed reading that.
11/18/2000 c1 4Nakato Rune
Wow. Really disjointed and dream-ish. Good job.
11/16/2000 c1 DarkClaw2k
Hmmm...interesting...
11/7/2000 c1 5Original Sin
cool...i have the same problem now that is...i got the dreaded plague of Writer's block...i can't seem to find the rite words but i got the plot all ready in my head!
11/4/2000 c1 12Jennifer Ever Zero
That was strange! Just like a real dream, being unable to read the words, and your cloudy mindset...you write one hell of a dream sequence.
11/4/2000 c1 5StarGlider
Whoa...really does feel like a dream. Well, now *I* feel tired. =) Cool!
11/3/2000 c1 11Pikajenn
I have had this happen to me before. It's happening to me now actually. Good fic, are you gonna write more like this? Very well written! Only with the paragraph would just have to wait till tomorrow night line? Usually with me, I wait till tomorrow night and then tomorrow night turns into two or three weeks later! I'm such the procrastinator!

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