for Catalina2/15/2003 c5 
2SouRpLuMMeRS
Sweet , short and stupendous. Just the way I like it! gives liz * stars . Hugs and Kisses SP
2SouRpLuMMeRSSweet , short and stupendous. Just the way I like it! gives liz * stars . Hugs and Kisses SP
2/11/2003 c5 1Evanescing Dreamer
Woohoo! an update. *grins* I love updates. I like this chapter, I'm just a bit confused about this entire George Bill and Carlos thing. I assume Bill is her dad, but that leaves the others still unknown.
1Evanescing DreamerWoohoo! an update. *grins* I love updates. I like this chapter, I'm just a bit confused about this entire George Bill and Carlos thing. I assume Bill is her dad, but that leaves the others still unknown.
2/3/2003 c4 Evanescing Dreamer
I like this story alot. Very unique. I certainly hope you write more soon however. Perhaps I should withhold updating Hidden Past until I have more of this story *ponders*
I like this story alot. Very unique. I certainly hope you write more soon however. Perhaps I should withhold updating Hidden Past until I have more of this story *ponders*
12/22/2002 c4 2SouRpLuMMeRS
'Pat honked the horn, impatiently waiting for his girlfriend. He was about to get out of the car when he saw the door open and close rapidly as Liz stepped outside into the bright sunlight.' how rude! but anywho, who's bill? I'm slow. Anywho, u better continue...and look out for my story , k? bye!
2SouRpLuMMeRS'Pat honked the horn, impatiently waiting for his girlfriend. He was about to get out of the car when he saw the door open and close rapidly as Liz stepped outside into the bright sunlight.' how rude! but anywho, who's bill? I'm slow. Anywho, u better continue...and look out for my story , k? bye!
12/22/2002 c3 SouRpLuMMeRS
All i gotta ask is why is liz staying with pat? on wif the next cjapter...
All i gotta ask is why is liz staying with pat? on wif the next cjapter...
12/22/2002 c2 SouRpLuMMeRS
hehe, LIZ has a body guard and she doesnt even have to pay for him! how unfair! hehe, anywho, great story and on wif the next chapter.
hehe, LIZ has a body guard and she doesnt even have to pay for him! how unfair! hehe, anywho, great story and on wif the next chapter.
12/22/2002 c1 SouRpLuMMeRS
Aww, that was sweet high skool love or something like that that. Anyway, I like your story a lot and I'm new to Original writting and I know that you guys dont really get a lot reviews, not as much as HP or BTVS writers get anyway so it's nice to see someone actually have the determination to continue a story without much moral support.
ANYWHO, ON WIF THE NEXT CHAPYER!
Aww, that was sweet high skool love or something like that that. Anyway, I like your story a lot and I'm new to Original writting and I know that you guys dont really get a lot reviews, not as much as HP or BTVS writers get anyway so it's nice to see someone actually have the determination to continue a story without much moral support.
ANYWHO, ON WIF THE NEXT CHAPYER!
12/3/2002 c3 Mystic Kiwi
lala I love this story. are you ever going to explain why Liz is living with Pat?
lala I love this story. are you ever going to explain why Liz is living with Pat?
12/1/2002 c3 Cheese and DG
that was good but to tell you the truth, it's a little freaky how lovey dovey they are with each other. I mean, when they call each other "my love" it's so lovey it's scary. even still, i think that this is sooo awesome but if you may, could you please expalin the whole parents relationship a little more? but keep updating! i like!
rock on,
Jennie
that was good but to tell you the truth, it's a little freaky how lovey dovey they are with each other. I mean, when they call each other "my love" it's so lovey it's scary. even still, i think that this is sooo awesome but if you may, could you please expalin the whole parents relationship a little more? but keep updating! i like!
rock on,
Jennie