for Spring's Blossoms11/25/2002 c2 
2Twisted Rose
Good job. That was a pretty good story. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
(`-`)Twisted Rose
2Twisted RoseGood job. That was a pretty good story. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
(`-`)Twisted Rose
11/25/2002 c2 6Lux Alexander
You've got a nice start on this XD The characters are very realistic, and it's very well-written. I do, however, suggest some serious plot twists to get away from the slight cliche-ness of the story. It's good - but you have to work hard to make it stand out ^^
6Lux AlexanderYou've got a nice start on this XD The characters are very realistic, and it's very well-written. I do, however, suggest some serious plot twists to get away from the slight cliche-ness of the story. It's good - but you have to work hard to make it stand out ^^
11/23/2002 c1 Avadriz
can't be bothered to sign in... you know why i'm here...
well, i think this has the potential to be a really good story and you should update like IMMEDIATELY.
i think anya is nice, mikki is sweet, and tobias is stuck up.
in the future, i believe anya will be nicer, mikki will get sweeter and tobias will be less stuck up.
i really can't think of anything else to write cos you've only put up ONE FREAKIN' CHAPTER!
UPDATE!
ok, bye bye!
have a nice day!
can't be bothered to sign in... you know why i'm here...
well, i think this has the potential to be a really good story and you should update like IMMEDIATELY.
i think anya is nice, mikki is sweet, and tobias is stuck up.
in the future, i believe anya will be nicer, mikki will get sweeter and tobias will be less stuck up.
i really can't think of anything else to write cos you've only put up ONE FREAKIN' CHAPTER!
UPDATE!
ok, bye bye!
have a nice day!
11/9/2002 c1 104Skittles1
Awwww wow this story is way kawaii n' good! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEAAASEEEEEE update again soon~~! You're SUCH a talented author, please keep working on all of your great stories! If I had half your talent, I'd die a happy woman! I really like this story and the idea, please write more soon!
104Skittles1Awwww wow this story is way kawaii n' good! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEAAASEEEEEE update again soon~~! You're SUCH a talented author, please keep working on all of your great stories! If I had half your talent, I'd die a happy woman! I really like this story and the idea, please write more soon!
11/9/2002 c1 9r.mai
yeah! show em what u got! ::mutter mutter:: stupid lil rich kids... ::mutter mutter: ::grins:: anywho, LOVELY chapte so far. i hope you'll be putting them out at a much faster rate. welps, till the next chapter then. ja~! ^^
9r.maiyeah! show em what u got! ::mutter mutter:: stupid lil rich kids... ::mutter mutter: ::grins:: anywho, LOVELY chapte so far. i hope you'll be putting them out at a much faster rate. welps, till the next chapter then. ja~! ^^
11/9/2002 c1 Guest
write more soon!
write more soon!
11/7/2002 c1 2Twisted Rose
That was a real good way to start this off. I've been eagerly awaiting this story ever since you mentioned it in your Profile a while back, and I can't say that I didn't like. Please put up the next chapter soon.
~Twisted Rose
2Twisted RoseThat was a real good way to start this off. I've been eagerly awaiting this story ever since you mentioned it in your Profile a while back, and I can't say that I didn't like. Please put up the next chapter soon.
~Twisted Rose
11/7/2002 c1 anonymous
It's really good. Keep it up!:)
It's really good. Keep it up!:)