for Hazuki's Sacrifice9/20/2008 c1 gerigirl
This story was simply amazing and yet so very sad for a while i pondered what it would mean just to have someone in your life that had to go thru that much pain and abuse, simply because you were different,sadly to say you still have people out here in the world that act just like his aunt and uncle.
And hopefully you'll have a friend to stand by you no matter what and hopefully that special someone will come into your life and protect you just as kaze did for yuri and that friend that stood by you would survive thru whatever ordeal may arise.
This story open my eyes to alot of the bigotry gay/lesbian people go thru on a daily basis because of some one else's hate for fear of the unknown.
I look forward to reading more of your stories in the furture.
This story was simply amazing and yet so very sad for a while i pondered what it would mean just to have someone in your life that had to go thru that much pain and abuse, simply because you were different,sadly to say you still have people out here in the world that act just like his aunt and uncle.
And hopefully you'll have a friend to stand by you no matter what and hopefully that special someone will come into your life and protect you just as kaze did for yuri and that friend that stood by you would survive thru whatever ordeal may arise.
This story open my eyes to alot of the bigotry gay/lesbian people go thru on a daily basis because of some one else's hate for fear of the unknown.
I look forward to reading more of your stories in the furture.
6/9/2007 c1 
6that reality
Wow. This was truly a great story. I like the plot and you carved the characters into very real people. Although it will be tough to continue the story from here, I am still looking forward to another chapter for this story by you.
6that realityWow. This was truly a great story. I like the plot and you carved the characters into very real people. Although it will be tough to continue the story from here, I am still looking forward to another chapter for this story by you.
9/12/2006 c1 1Dark Kaiser973
This was so beautiful! I loved it!It almost made me cry Poor Hazuki T TGreat story!
Dark Kaiser
1Dark Kaiser973This was so beautiful! I loved it!It almost made me cry Poor Hazuki T TGreat story!
Dark Kaiser
6/26/2006 c1 2L.A. Bennett
Wow. That was so beautiful. I'm crying now. I'm adding this one to my favorites. If you have any plans for any sort of sequel, I urge you to contact me somehow to tell me. I love this story, and I'll tell you now that this won't be the last time I read it. -L.A. Bennett
2L.A. BennettWow. That was so beautiful. I'm crying now. I'm adding this one to my favorites. If you have any plans for any sort of sequel, I urge you to contact me somehow to tell me. I love this story, and I'll tell you now that this won't be the last time I read it. -L.A. Bennett
11/3/2005 c1 chrnoskittty
Oh...MyThis was so sad...The first non-fanfiction fiction that I've read that made me cry...Wow...Beauiful; Absolutley beautiful.
Oh...MyThis was so sad...The first non-fanfiction fiction that I've read that made me cry...Wow...Beauiful; Absolutley beautiful.
5/19/2005 c1 Dana
The idea behind the story is okay, but it seemed very rushed, and the quality of writing sufferered because of that. Certain parts were unrealistic, like the fact that they were in love after only a day, and the men automatically knew where Kaze lived. Also, they randomly decided to take the train and flee. In real life, things don't happen like that. You should take the time to stop and write everything in detail, explaning situations and setting the mood a little more.
Other than that, the story was very enjoyable. Keep up the good work. :)
The idea behind the story is okay, but it seemed very rushed, and the quality of writing sufferered because of that. Certain parts were unrealistic, like the fact that they were in love after only a day, and the men automatically knew where Kaze lived. Also, they randomly decided to take the train and flee. In real life, things don't happen like that. You should take the time to stop and write everything in detail, explaning situations and setting the mood a little more.
Other than that, the story was very enjoyable. Keep up the good work. :)