for Crimson Angel6/29/2018 c18 Guest
this is really good, but i feel as if it beeds an epilouge
this is really good, but i feel as if it beeds an epilouge
9/20/2013 c25 The Red Dove
So...everyone dies? Okay. It was a very well written story, so it doesn't piss me off like it normally would, which is actually unusual. Congratulations, you've got amazing talent. And that ending paragraph was a perfect ending, I'm glad you didn't over describe God or heaven, so well done there.
I guess I have to log in after this review and add this to my favorites now...the things you're putting me through...sheesh :)
So...everyone dies? Okay. It was a very well written story, so it doesn't piss me off like it normally would, which is actually unusual. Congratulations, you've got amazing talent. And that ending paragraph was a perfect ending, I'm glad you didn't over describe God or heaven, so well done there.
I guess I have to log in after this review and add this to my favorites now...the things you're putting me through...sheesh :)
10/14/2012 c25 
4TheScarlettShadows
OMG! I was crying so hard. Still am. But this is magnificent! It's a work of art. Its angelic. Where did you get the storyline from?
Goodbye and Goodluck
TheScarlettShadows
4TheScarlettShadowsOMG! I was crying so hard. Still am. But this is magnificent! It's a work of art. Its angelic. Where did you get the storyline from?
Goodbye and Goodluck
TheScarlettShadows
6/24/2008 c25 2PenelopePotter
This story was hella good! I don't think I have ever read a story by an unproffesional author with this much emotion! Super good! I seriously hope you keep writing!
2PenelopePotterThis story was hella good! I don't think I have ever read a story by an unproffesional author with this much emotion! Super good! I seriously hope you keep writing!
6/5/2007 c25 3Frank A Wandering Soul
i loved it it was so good...i almost started to cry that is a good thing i think lol
~*Marilen*~
3Frank A Wandering Souli loved it it was so good...i almost started to cry that is a good thing i think lol
~*Marilen*~
4/7/2003 c25 Hele
I started reading this ages ago, but I only just finishied it, so I can review. It is *very* well written, and it hangs together perfectly. I love your style, and for once, I wasn't mentally rewriting as I went along, because I was totally drwn into the stry. Well done!
I started reading this ages ago, but I only just finishied it, so I can review. It is *very* well written, and it hangs together perfectly. I love your style, and for once, I wasn't mentally rewriting as I went along, because I was totally drwn into the stry. Well done!
3/31/2003 c1 5Lost and Lonely Soul
im at school reading this. and i like it! ive only read this chap/prolouge, whatever you would call it. I like it, although i am only a little way, i am positive this will be an excellent story. Please continue and I will keep reading!
5Lost and Lonely Soulim at school reading this. and i like it! ive only read this chap/prolouge, whatever you would call it. I like it, although i am only a little way, i am positive this will be an excellent story. Please continue and I will keep reading!
3/20/2003 c3 5Naja Copperleaf
I really like this so far, but I have a few questions. First of all it says in the 1st Chapter that Dana never believed Al that they were angels until she found feathers in her bed, but it also says that Al had been doing the job since birth (and, logically, Dana would have, too). In addition, it seems to me that they both would have more jobs than a few per day, and, probably, more like thousands. I don't mean to offend or anything, but I really like the writing and the plot so far, so I want to make sure I know what's going on. Great fic! ;)
5Naja CopperleafI really like this so far, but I have a few questions. First of all it says in the 1st Chapter that Dana never believed Al that they were angels until she found feathers in her bed, but it also says that Al had been doing the job since birth (and, logically, Dana would have, too). In addition, it seems to me that they both would have more jobs than a few per day, and, probably, more like thousands. I don't mean to offend or anything, but I really like the writing and the plot so far, so I want to make sure I know what's going on. Great fic! ;)
2/26/2003 c25 1Neverthought
This story is one of my favourites, the only reason I didn't review it sooner is because I only just recently received a fanfiction account . . but that is not the point. The point is that I am so happy to see a long novel-type story actually completed on this site. It seems alot of them just die, don't they? I'm very proud. The only thing that confused me was the whole how angels could die, having myself grown up with the belief that such beings were immortal. Thus I'm glad you're writing a sequel, very glad. This is getting long isn't it . . . Anyway, I hope the sequel is as good as this.
1NeverthoughtThis story is one of my favourites, the only reason I didn't review it sooner is because I only just recently received a fanfiction account . . but that is not the point. The point is that I am so happy to see a long novel-type story actually completed on this site. It seems alot of them just die, don't they? I'm very proud. The only thing that confused me was the whole how angels could die, having myself grown up with the belief that such beings were immortal. Thus I'm glad you're writing a sequel, very glad. This is getting long isn't it . . . Anyway, I hope the sequel is as good as this.
2/21/2003 c1 1Clyde4life
i like the first chapter, its good, but i hope in the rest of the story you somehow explain how they became human, were they given birth to, or they just appear, i like the city of angels thing, um that gal who get kill did she die in human world or that next world, and plus this is a bit short, so i like that. well i ga read the rest soon. bye
1Clyde4lifei like the first chapter, its good, but i hope in the rest of the story you somehow explain how they became human, were they given birth to, or they just appear, i like the city of angels thing, um that gal who get kill did she die in human world or that next world, and plus this is a bit short, so i like that. well i ga read the rest soon. bye