for Rain Tears7/8/2006 c1 Achillea
满好看的! I liked the comparison between the tears and the rain- it really helped the overall mood and tone of the piece. Great job!
满好看的! I liked the comparison between the tears and the rain- it really helped the overall mood and tone of the piece. Great job!
2/5/2003 c1 
1Naori
really good ar!
good thing I learned some simplified chinese or I wouldnt have been able to read such a good story. more of a poetry.
but I can actually feel that this brings out. keep up the good work.
1Naorireally good ar!
good thing I learned some simplified chinese or I wouldnt have been able to read such a good story. more of a poetry.
but I can actually feel that this brings out. keep up the good work.
12/7/2002 c1 2Aisaki Sumi
its really good! I love poems that connects the rain with loneliness ^-^ Update soon!
2Aisaki Sumiits really good! I love poems that connects the rain with loneliness ^-^ Update soon!
11/15/2002 c1 14Chen
Wow, this is very good, I like how you connect love and the rain. Plus, it's sad, I love sad things.
Chen
14ChenWow, this is very good, I like how you connect love and the rain. Plus, it's sad, I love sad things.
Chen
11/10/2002 c1 7Songstress Lenne
Funny how it's raining right now as I read this poem. The rain really helped bring out the mood of the poem ^_^ I liked this a lot, please keep writing!
7Songstress LenneFunny how it's raining right now as I read this poem. The rain really helped bring out the mood of the poem ^_^ I liked this a lot, please keep writing!