for Hiding3/22/2003 c1 
1A Writer for God
It's very well written-you have great potential as an author! Please consider writing more to this, or maybe even write something else and try to get it published.
PS - thank you for critiquing my poem :)
1A Writer for GodIt's very well written-you have great potential as an author! Please consider writing more to this, or maybe even write something else and try to get it published.
PS - thank you for critiquing my poem :)
11/11/2002 c1 16clifjumpr13
Interesting premise. Definitely something that could use expanding. Very creative, but too short to offer too much of a critical opinion on (hint hint). Anyway, well written, and I hope you write more.
16clifjumpr13Interesting premise. Definitely something that could use expanding. Very creative, but too short to offer too much of a critical opinion on (hint hint). Anyway, well written, and I hope you write more.