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1/7/2003 c1 9Lonestar Sweetheart
Really sad and painful. I know there are a lot of people who feel this way. Even I do sometimes. This poem should be published, i think there are so many people who could relate.
12/19/2002 c1 26Heart4Luv
I came to read your stuff because you read mine! Congratulations! Not only were you the first person to write a review for me, but you are also extremely talented as a writer too.

By the way, as someone who has technical problems ALL THE TIME... how the heck did you get your poem to stay in separate lines? As you might have noticed, my "sonnet" all got lumped into one ugly paragraph...

and I have no idea how to fix it. Peace, and keep writing!
12/5/2002 c1 9Eunuch
hmmm...the contant repition of "I see.." should have bothered me...should have made me not like this very much, but I do...^_^...

my favorite two lines:

/I see her hands roving; yearning to hide what is there/

/I see her mind drift into a life of fiction/

good job...you should post more...

oh...and thanks for the review...
12/3/2002 c1 3Mia Devine
"I see her mind drift into a life of fiction"

There is so much real emotion in this poem, it brims with talent. beautiful and sad and i love the way it ends

"I see myself, looking back at me"
11/26/2002 c1 7mythirdeye
Mind-numbingly beautiful. As beautiful, no doubt, as the poet :)
11/12/2002 c1 La-depdpeps
utterly stunning.

"I see she lacks confidence - it's replaced with pain" -that was a very beautiful line and so was-

"I see myself, looking back at me" -That was wonderful, this is truly a sweet yet sad poem, it really touched me and that is rare! well done, i'm sorry you feel this way about yourself.

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