for Shoe12/8/2002 c1 
100Keep it 100
Very powerful work. The idea of using a shoe is very original. I'm sorry for the loss you suffered...
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100Very powerful work. The idea of using a shoe is very original. I'm sorry for the loss you suffered...
~Heart of the Sword
11/15/2002 c1 12Sierra Nicole
Wow, this was good. Out of curiosity, why a shoe? And kudos for fitting "inconsolable" into a poem. Quite an icky word to try fitting into just about any metre.
Good to see an update to your page here. It's been a while... (grin)
~Sie
12Sierra NicoleWow, this was good. Out of curiosity, why a shoe? And kudos for fitting "inconsolable" into a poem. Quite an icky word to try fitting into just about any metre.
Good to see an update to your page here. It's been a while... (grin)
~Sie
11/12/2002 c1 Silence
This was a great little poem, from an interesting perspective. Keep up the writing!
This was a great little poem, from an interesting perspective. Keep up the writing!