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1/24/2005 c1 crazy-lady141
This was wonderful. Beautifully descriptive with perfect imagery. Love it.
2/12/2004 c1 oldshoe
I was so stunned that I laughed when I read this poem! Not because it's BAD mind you! (I liked it very much) But even the title is close to one of my own poems. So I had to read it of course and... well geeze just go read it if you want to see the similarities. They're not exactly the same or anything, it was just strange I guess.
ANYway...
Nice poem (love the subject of course. lol.) and thanks for the great read.
(I'm serious! It even ends nearly the same as mine-"Autumn's Demise" is the name of it. *inserts eerie music* : P )
1/21/2004 c1 11donzilla70
I like the circle of life concept...

Nice imagery...

Well done...

Keep writing
11/20/2003 c1 92Celestial Sailor
Perhaps the most alluring thing about Mother Nature is rebirth, a human yearning. With death comes rebirth, judgement, discovery. The only thing I noticed was your word use, "Wind blows callously". It makes sense, but it isn't the most appropriate word to be using.. I feel you could have chosen a different word and reaped a stronger effect.
7/7/2003 c1 Akanasu
This is an interesting perspective. Nice job on your word choice. I like it! :D
11/15/2002 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
Murrrrr...

Es muy beino.

Me likey, you stoopid whore! XP

~Namir

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