for Red6/10/2004 c1 
70elvenstorm
Lol had to review this as did a similar poem a while ago! When I say similar I mean was thinking about red that its really... Anyway like yours better especially the 'tint of a juicy russet apple'. Very nice line! Love the colour red, there's so much to it and you explore that well! Great poem well done.
70elvenstormLol had to review this as did a similar poem a while ago! When I say similar I mean was thinking about red that its really... Anyway like yours better especially the 'tint of a juicy russet apple'. Very nice line! Love the colour red, there's so much to it and you explore that well! Great poem well done.
5/12/2003 c1 87OptimisticRomantic
WOW! only word in my head..I really did like this..it's so good..A WONDERFUL PIECE..really it is..Wundaful darling, wundaful ~_^
~Sandra~
87OptimisticRomanticWOW! only word in my head..I really did like this..it's so good..A WONDERFUL PIECE..really it is..Wundaful darling, wundaful ~_^
~Sandra~
12/14/2002 c1 38Catticus
cool. luv the way u described the colour. gives me an ide-*******(blackout)DOPE! i hate that!
38Catticuscool. luv the way u described the colour. gives me an ide-*******(blackout)DOPE! i hate that!
12/4/2002 c1 167E. Hisifithith
Hey wow! I like this poem thingybop! And usually I don't like poetry that doesn't rhyme but every once in a while, there's some free verse that I just like... I do not know why... But anyways! great job!
167E. HisifithithHey wow! I like this poem thingybop! And usually I don't like poetry that doesn't rhyme but every once in a while, there's some free verse that I just like... I do not know why... But anyways! great job!