for Deny Him5/4/2006 c1 
23firestar267
Wow. This is so good,its written excellently and really makes you feel for the characters - obviously not him - well done! Keep it up!
23firestar267Wow. This is so good,its written excellently and really makes you feel for the characters - obviously not him - well done! Keep it up!
6/14/2004 c1 2W3DNESDAY
arrgh..that was so dark, and depressing.. i feel all down now..
i don't know why she didnt kill that effing sonofa* .. gr *muderous look
i can just imagine the sick, fat little bas*d ..
that was well written.. it makes me wanna kill somebody, like these things always do
there were a couple spelling errors in the begining that you might wanna look at but i didnt notice any others in the rest of the story
i hope the rest of your stories are happier.. 'cause with my disposition..
well.. i need to stop rambling
~cheers!
2W3DNESDAYarrgh..that was so dark, and depressing.. i feel all down now..
i don't know why she didnt kill that effing sonofa* .. gr *muderous look
i can just imagine the sick, fat little bas*d ..
that was well written.. it makes me wanna kill somebody, like these things always do
there were a couple spelling errors in the begining that you might wanna look at but i didnt notice any others in the rest of the story
i hope the rest of your stories are happier.. 'cause with my disposition..
well.. i need to stop rambling
~cheers!
1/3/2004 c1 none-the-less
OMG! That is the first story I've read that actually brought tears to my eyes ... wow ... you are a *great* writer!
OMG! That is the first story I've read that actually brought tears to my eyes ... wow ... you are a *great* writer!
6/28/2003 c1 20madfersupernova
this is, in a word, technically and literally brilliant. profoundly moving and true to life,poignant. i would be gratified to see a prequel, perhaps, of this young woman's life before her suicide. congratulations, and keep writing! maybe you could review my stuff, or email me on . thanks. laura
20madfersupernovathis is, in a word, technically and literally brilliant. profoundly moving and true to life,poignant. i would be gratified to see a prequel, perhaps, of this young woman's life before her suicide. congratulations, and keep writing! maybe you could review my stuff, or email me on . thanks. laura
6/4/2003 c1 361Gleechumber
I really like this, though it's a little disturbing.
The last two lines end it perfectly. I'd like to know what his reaction was when he saw her body though (just because I'm morbid!)
361GleechumberI really like this, though it's a little disturbing.
The last two lines end it perfectly. I'd like to know what his reaction was when he saw her body though (just because I'm morbid!)
12/12/2002 c1 2McG
That was an excellent story. There is no other word for it - excellent. And silverchair rocks! :P
2McGThat was an excellent story. There is no other word for it - excellent. And silverchair rocks! :P
11/23/2002 c1 19Mystifying
Amazing story, goes to show how some people in this world are (refering to the man) and how much some people will put up with (refering to the girl)
19MystifyingAmazing story, goes to show how some people in this world are (refering to the man) and how much some people will put up with (refering to the girl)
11/21/2002 c1 1Frappachinoluvr
This is a very powerful story...it feels so real...very moving. When I read it, I felt as if I was in the mind of the girl...I felt sympathy and sadness...This is a good written story if it could make me feel all that. Good job!
Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story. It was my first one...you were being TOO kind! :o)
1FrappachinoluvrThis is a very powerful story...it feels so real...very moving. When I read it, I felt as if I was in the mind of the girl...I felt sympathy and sadness...This is a good written story if it could make me feel all that. Good job!
Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story. It was my first one...you were being TOO kind! :o)
11/16/2002 c1 Lippy
Wow, tha was really sad. I consider myself to be a fairly good writer, at any rate, I can turn out a story that gets people to ask me, "What happens next?", so i can usuall tell when i am reading a good story too. This falls into that catogory. This website makes me jealous quite ofton. Also, thanks for your review. Now, I'm off to read your longer story.
Wow, tha was really sad. I consider myself to be a fairly good writer, at any rate, I can turn out a story that gets people to ask me, "What happens next?", so i can usuall tell when i am reading a good story too. This falls into that catogory. This website makes me jealous quite ofton. Also, thanks for your review. Now, I'm off to read your longer story.
11/15/2002 c1 idontwriteherenomore
A very strong subject to write about, and I think you did very well! Very good describtions. I was not offended at all but I think your story was fabuless!
Keep on writing
Eli
A very strong subject to write about, and I think you did very well! Very good describtions. I was not offended at all but I think your story was fabuless!
Keep on writing
Eli
11/13/2002 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
Incredible. Marvelously moving and real. *sighs* I think that happens much more often than people realize. . .most people see that as their only way out, and, sadly sometimes, it is. Very good story. (BTW, there were a few typos, but not enough to be a nusiciance, so don't worry about the spell check) :) Keep writing!
123breakdown in the waiting roomIncredible. Marvelously moving and real. *sighs* I think that happens much more often than people realize. . .most people see that as their only way out, and, sadly sometimes, it is. Very good story. (BTW, there were a few typos, but not enough to be a nusiciance, so don't worry about the spell check) :) Keep writing!
11/13/2002 c1 Melitta
Very well written; good descriptions, I liked the way you looked back on past events, and the ending.
Very well written; good descriptions, I liked the way you looked back on past events, and the ending.