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8/1/2005 c1 3WandererofHope
I wasn't too fond of the first stanza because I think it started out great in the the first 3 lines, but then the 'Mother Nature' line...um, it seemed too..."delibrate." Also, the poet part, sort of the same thing. Maybe you should extend those parts to make the first stanza more flowing and appealing. But I swear, you know what to say, but really can't express them sometimes. All right, the rest of the stanzas, well done.
11/15/2002 c1 Needa S
Awesome! R&R my work and keep writing!

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