for Beneath Swirling Indigo5/28/2003 c1 
38Shadafakup
Interestin.. The poem flowed dreamily which probably means u have achieved your purpose.. Well- hmm.. I liked the images used.. Beautiful, and far from what reality is like.. The endin is good, I thought it left quite an impact on me.. Very beautiful.. I gotta say it again.. Its a fantastic poem..
38ShadafakupInterestin.. The poem flowed dreamily which probably means u have achieved your purpose.. Well- hmm.. I liked the images used.. Beautiful, and far from what reality is like.. The endin is good, I thought it left quite an impact on me.. Very beautiful.. I gotta say it again.. Its a fantastic poem..
4/29/2003 c1 7Unhappily Neverafter
Brit: *Is a fish* Wook! Im a fish! *Blub-blub* ^_^
Kristi: -.-; mk, but,...I love this poem too. It rymes! Great!
7Unhappily NeverafterBrit: *Is a fish* Wook! Im a fish! *Blub-blub* ^_^
Kristi: -.-; mk, but,...I love this poem too. It rymes! Great!
2/28/2003 c1 Maiden of the Forest
That was great! That poem was very VERY good.better than good IT WAS GREAT!
That was great! That poem was very VERY good.better than good IT WAS GREAT!
2/26/2003 c1 12Only 1 Twitch
Very, very nice, it makes me want to write. And believe me, that's the highest compliment I can give ^_^
12Only 1 TwitchVery, very nice, it makes me want to write. And believe me, that's the highest compliment I can give ^_^
2/23/2003 c1 89Lyria Shard
This was a stunning piece of poetry. I love the way you contrasted the beauty of the underwater world with our own "realm of mortals", I realy love this piece.
Sal
89Lyria ShardThis was a stunning piece of poetry. I love the way you contrasted the beauty of the underwater world with our own "realm of mortals", I realy love this piece.
Sal
12/1/2002 c1 99Little Miss Shadow
Wow - very impressive. I love fantasy themed things int he first place, so that's really what triggered my interest in this poem. I love the contrasts made between the world of men and that mystical world from beneath. It brings across very clearly how pure and untarnished the one below is and how corrupted we have made the world above. Wonderful.
99Little Miss ShadowWow - very impressive. I love fantasy themed things int he first place, so that's really what triggered my interest in this poem. I love the contrasts made between the world of men and that mystical world from beneath. It brings across very clearly how pure and untarnished the one below is and how corrupted we have made the world above. Wonderful.
11/25/2002 c1 90SweetGrape
Very pretty:)
Beautiful images and descriptions, very whimsical and dreamy.
Interesting as it flows onto a different world.
'Your heart doesn't flame, your mind doesn't glow' is a great line.
Very angry, patronising, pessimistic and almsot scared as you order people back to their own world. And then there's a chance- 'Or at least until that day'.
Very nice idea and descriptions. Very soft and fantastic (fantasy).
90SweetGrapeVery pretty:)
Beautiful images and descriptions, very whimsical and dreamy.
Interesting as it flows onto a different world.
'Your heart doesn't flame, your mind doesn't glow' is a great line.
Very angry, patronising, pessimistic and almsot scared as you order people back to their own world. And then there's a chance- 'Or at least until that day'.
Very nice idea and descriptions. Very soft and fantastic (fantasy).
11/23/2002 c1 9januaryisforever
Whoa! How COOL! ::searches for maps on secrety underwater castles:: Wow... very mysterious and dreamy, as all your wonderful stuff is. ^-^ I love it! It sounds like a song...
~Raven
9januaryisforeverWhoa! How COOL! ::searches for maps on secrety underwater castles:: Wow... very mysterious and dreamy, as all your wonderful stuff is. ^-^ I love it! It sounds like a song...
~Raven